Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have at least one My shop out the list can help me to buy my favorite scenes in the shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list for my work. I think it's bad plan to improve my work. Ability and I. Prepare my. Aye. Do this work in my life?
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
First I think could make a list can. Improve people. Life skills and 2nd I see Kit Kat on improved self ability to our. Life.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer make a list on paper because I think make paper can improve our life ability and improve our skills.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法错误较多,表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并用正确的语法表达原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法和表达错误严重,缺乏连贯性。建议直接回答问题,并用完整句子说明做清单的效果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and improve my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱,未能回答问题。建议理解问题后,给出合理原因并用连贯句子表达。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 表达不自然且语法错误,理由不明确。建议清楚表达偏好并说明具体原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better.
× Yes, I have at least one My shop out the list can help me to buy my favorite scenes in the shop.
✓ Yes, I have at least one. My shopping list can help me to buy my favorite items in the shop.
句中“My shop out the list”结构不正确,应为“shopping list”表示购物清单;“scenes”应为“items”表示物品,且复数形式正确。
× Yes, I make a list for my work. I think it's bad plan to improve my work. Ability and I. Prepare my. Aye. Do this work in my life?
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. I think it's a good plan to improve my work ability and prepare myself to do this work in my life.
原句结构混乱,缺少连贯性和完整句子,应调整为完整且连贯的句子,表达清晰。
× First I think could make a list can. Improve people. Life skills and 2nd I see Kit Kat on improved self ability to our. Life.
✓ First, I think making a list can improve people's life skills, and second, I see it can improve self-ability in our life.
原句断句错误,语序混乱,缺少主谓一致,应调整为完整连贯的句子。
× I prefer make a list on paper because I think make paper can improve our life ability and improve our skills.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think making a list on paper can improve our life skills and improve our abilities.
动词后缺少不定式to;“make paper”用法错误,应为“making a list on paper”;“life ability”表达不准确,应为“life skills”。