Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No I didn't because my MBTI is P so I'm preferred to. Was I buy what me by two when I was in the shop?
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I'm work I prefer to take the wrist because. The first list is what this this work as I had the. Very important or not important? So it's come back. My work is very.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because it can make people stress. I think this lists when I today I will. Do that. And. It's the cut line is very hard. So I think so people doesn't like this.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make lists using my phone. Because when I using the paper I. This paper where is it but smartphone I can. Using every time so I don't forget this lists.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 대답하고, 이유를 간단하고 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 문장 구조를 단순하게 유지하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 리스트를 사용하는 이유와 효과를 간단하고 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks by importance, and it works well to keep me focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 이유를 명확하게 제시하고, 문장을 완성형으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed or pressured to complete all the tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 답변이 부분적으로 이해되지만 문법과 문장 연결이 부자연스럽습니다. 이유를 명확하게 설명하고, 문장 연결어를 사용하여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I don't forget my lists like I might with paper.
× No I didn't because my MBTI is P so I'm preferred to.
✓ No, I didn't because my MBTI is P, so I prefer to.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm preferred to' which is a passive form and incorrect here. The correct form is 'I prefer to' in the present tense to express habitual preference. Also, 'didn't' is past tense, but the preference is a current state, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate.
× Was I buy what me by two when I was in the shop?
✓ Did I buy two of what I wanted when I was in the shop?
The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct question form in past tense is 'Did I buy...' followed by the object. The phrase 'what me by two' is incorrect and should be 'two of what I wanted' to make sense.
× Yes, when I'm work I prefer to take the wrist because.
✓ Yes, when I work, I prefer to take the list because.
The phrase 'when I'm work' is incorrect; it should be 'when I work' using the base form after 'when'. Also, 'take the wrist' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'take the list'.
× The first list is what this this work as I had the.
✓ The first list is about what work I have to do.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A clearer sentence is needed to express the idea that the list contains tasks to be done.
× Very important or not important? So it's come back.
✓ Whether it is very important or not important, I come back to it.
The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunctions and verb forms.
× My work is very.
✓ My work is very important.
The original sentence is incomplete. Adding an adjective like 'important' completes the thought.
× Because it can make people stress.
✓ Because it can make people stressed.
The verb 'make' is followed by an object and an adjective describing the object. 'Stress' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'stressed'.
× I think this lists when I today I will.
✓ I think about these lists when I plan my day.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a clear and grammatical sentence.
× Do that. And. It's the cut line is very hard.
✓ Doing that is very hard.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear sentence.
× So I think so people doesn't like this.
✓ So I think some people don't like this.
'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'so' is repeated unnecessarily.
× Because when I using the paper I.
✓ Because when I use paper, I...
After 'when', the base form of the verb is used, so 'using' should be 'use'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.
× This paper where is it but smartphone I can.
✓ I lose the paper, but I can use my smartphone.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.
× Using every time so I don't forget this lists.
✓ I can use it anytime so I don't forget these lists.
'Using every time' is incorrect; 'I can use it anytime' is correct. Also, 'this lists' should be 'these lists' (plural).