List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and incorrect grammar. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need. However, sometimes I shop without a list depending on my mood. For example, when I visit the departmental store, I often buy things that catch my eye.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and linking words to improve clarity. Use correct grammar and connect your ideas logically to make your response more effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. For instance, when I have multiple tasks to complete, writing them down ensures I don't forget anything important. Therefore, this method definitely increases my productivity and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons using simple and correct language. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. Also, they prefer to shop spontaneously rather than planning everything in advance.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference and give specific reasons using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me. Moreover, using my phone helps me keep all my notes organized. I avoid using paper lists since I might forget them at home.

× When I shop it, I'll put it in mind what to buy it and sometimes I don't make a list before shop BIH 'cause sometimes it depends on my mood.

✓ When I shop, I keep in mind what to buy and sometimes I don't make a list before shopping because sometimes it depends on my mood.

The phrase 'put it in mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep in mind'. Also, 'before shop' should be 'before shopping' because after 'before' we use the gerund form of the verb. The word 'it' after 'what to buy' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× When I want to purchase anything, I go to the departmental store and telling myself with my eyes can catch.

✓ When I want to purchase anything, I go to the departmental store and tell myself to look carefully.

The verb 'telling' is incorrect here; it should be 'tell' to match the simple present tense. Also, the phrase 'with my eyes can catch' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'to look carefully' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, are you really make a list for my work 'cause it helps me stay focused and organized.

✓ Yes, I really make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and subject-verb agreement. 'Are you really make' is incorrect; it should be 'I really make'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate here.

× For example, when I am multiple task to complete, writing them down and sure I don't forget anything important.

✓ For example, when I have multiple tasks to complete, I write them down to make sure I don't forget anything important.

'Multiple task' should be plural 'multiple tasks'. Also, the sentence lacks a proper verb and subject in the second part; 'writing them down and sure' is incorrect and is corrected to 'I write them down to make sure'.

× This is important. So this matter method definitely works for me as it increases my productivity and reduces stress.

✓ This is important. So this method definitely works for me as it increases my productivity and reduces stress.

The phrase 'matter method' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'method' alone. The sentence structure is improved by removing the unnecessary word.

× Yeah, sometimes people dislike math English because they find themselves restrictive and they used it both for Dennis catching power at the time when they used to purchase anything and additionally somewhere feel that it's necessary to make her less before she.

✓ Yeah, sometimes people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and they use them both for decision-making power at the time when they purchase anything. Additionally, some feel that it's not necessary to make a list before shopping.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun errors: 'math English' is incorrect and replaced with 'making lists'; 'themselves restrictive' should be 'them restrictive' referring to lists; 'used it' should be 'use them'; 'Dennis catching power' is unclear and corrected to 'decision-making power'; 'somewhere feel' corrected to 'some feel'; 'her less before she' is unclear and corrected to 'a list before shopping'.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is always with me and it also there's. Help me to maintain my nose and all things so I'll make a list on my notes an additionally paper place shopping I don't go for because as I can forget paper.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and it also helps me to maintain my notes and all things. So I make a list on my notes. Additionally, I don't go for paper lists because I can forget paper.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'phone' should be 'my phone'; 'there's. Help me' is incorrect and corrected to 'helps me'; 'maintain my nose' is a typo and corrected to 'maintain my notes'; 'an additionally paper place shopping I don't go for' is unclear and corrected to 'Additionally, I don't go for paper lists'; 'as I can forget paper' is corrected to 'because I can forget paper' for clarity.