Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
It depends. If I need to buy a lot of things at one time, I will make a list. In this way I will not forget to buy something important, something necessary. But if I if I only go window shopping, I will not make the list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, I will write down what I need to do. And mega least. And I usually use calendar to schedule my time. It works very well for me because it's really hard for me to remember all the routing or the task I need to finish.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Oh, first. Sometimes they call. It takes time because you need to write down or you need to exert some. Words in your smartphone Type some words in your smartphone and sometimes it. That they are just lazy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to mega list on my phone. Because I carry my phone all the time. If I write down on the paper, sometimes I forget. I leave paper at home, and if I did, I'm at school. I don't know. Hot thing I need to do next?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點重複,像是「if I if I」和「make a list」多次出現,建議可以更自然且簡潔地表達,避免冗言贅詞。此外,句子結構可以更流暢,並使用連接詞使內容更連貫。
Ví dụ: I usually make a list when I have many items to buy, so I don't forget anything important. However, if I'm just window shopping, I don't bother making one.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有語言錯誤,如「mega least」應為「make a list」,以及「routing」用詞不當。建議注意發音和用詞準確性,並嘗試用更完整且連貫的句子來表達。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list of tasks and use a calendar to schedule my time. This method works well because I find it hard to remember all the tasks I need to complete.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 這段回答語意不清且有多處斷句錯誤,建議練習組織句子並使用連接詞,使回答更完整且易懂。也要避免使用不確定或不完整的表達。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time to write them down, especially on a smartphone. Others might simply feel lazy to do it.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有發音錯誤("mega list"應為"make a list")和語法錯誤,句子不完整且不連貫。建議練習正確發音,並用完整句子表達想法,避免斷句過短。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. If I write on paper, I might forget it at home and then I won't know what to do next.
× But if I if I only go window shopping, I will not make the list.
✓ But if I only go window shopping, I will not make the list.
The phrase 'if I if I' contains a repeated word, which is a typographical error rather than a grammar problem. Removing the repeated 'if I' corrects the sentence.
× And mega least.
✓ And make a list.
The phrase 'mega least' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. The correct phrase is 'make a list' which fits the context of writing down tasks.
× And I usually use calendar to schedule my time.
✓ And I usually use a calendar to schedule my time.
The noun 'calendar' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.
× because it's really hard for me to remember all the routing or the task I need to finish.
✓ because it's really hard for me to remember all the routine or the tasks I need to finish.
The word 'routing' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'routine'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'all the' which implies multiple items.
× Sometimes they call.
✓ Sometimes they say it takes time.
The sentence 'Sometimes they call.' is incomplete and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'Sometimes they say it takes time.' to explain why some people don't like making lists.
× And sometimes it. That they are just lazy.
✓ And sometimes it's because they are just lazy.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'it's because' clarifies the reason and corrects the pronoun usage.
× I prefer to mega list on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
The phrase 'mega list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list' which means to create a list.
× If I write down on the paper, sometimes I forget.
✓ If I write it down on the paper, sometimes I forget.
The verb 'write down' requires an object; adding 'it' clarifies what is being written down.
× and if I did, I'm at school.
✓ and if I did, I'm at school.
The sentence is unclear and seems incomplete. Possibly intended as 'and if I did, and I'm at school,' but no clear grammar problem from the list applies here.
× I don't know. Hot thing I need to do next?
✓ I don't know what thing I need to do next.
The phrase 'Hot thing' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'what thing' to form a proper question or statement.