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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

To be honest I do not make a list for my shop unless I have alot of things to buy or I have a limited budgets.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I do not like making a list for. My work becauses. I think I will be stressful. If I do not finish it.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, for someone like me, having planned actually creates more stress. Then there are people who just think it's unnecessary. And of course, some people are just lazy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I definitely prefer making lists on my phone becauses. It's convenient, I can shake all add anything easily.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词有些错误,比如“alot”应为“a lot”,“budgets”应为单数形式“budget”。建议注意语法和拼写,同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I usually don't make a shopping list unless I have many items to buy or a limited budget.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“becauses”应为“because”,句子结构不完整。建议练习完整句子表达,并注意连贯性。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like making lists for my work because I feel stressed if I can't finish everything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,表达了多种原因,但句子连接略显简单。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Well, for someone like me, having a plan actually creates more stress. Moreover, some people think making lists is unnecessary, and of course, others might just be lazy.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误“becauses”,且表达不清晰“shake all add anything”。建议注意拼写和表达的准确性,使用更自然的句子。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I can easily add or remove items.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× To be honest I do not make a list for my shop unless I have alot of things to buy or I have a limited budgets.

To be honest I do not make a list for my shopping unless I have a lot of things to buy or I have a limited budget.

这里“alot”应为“a lot”,是拼写错误;“budgets”应为单数“budget”,因为前面有限定词“a limited”,表示单数。购物用“shopping”更自然。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× To be honest, I do not like making a list for. My work becauses. I think I will be stressful. If I do not finish it.

To be honest, I do not like making a list for my work because I think I will be stressed if I do not finish it.

“making a list for.”后面缺少宾语,应补充“my work”;“becauses”拼写错误,应为“because”;“I will be stressful”应为“I will be stressed”,因为“stressful”形容事物,“stressed”形容人。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× To be honest, I do not like making a list for. My work becauses. I think I will be stressful. If I do not finish it.

To be honest, I do not like making a list for my work because I think I will be stressed if I do not finish it.

句子中断断续续,连接词使用不当,应将句子合并为一个完整句子,使用“because”和“if”连接原因和条件。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× Well, for someone like me, having planned actually creates more stress. Then there are people who just think it's unnecessary. And of course, some people are just lazy.

Well, for someone like me, having a plan actually creates more stress. Then there are people who just think it's unnecessary. And of course, some people are just lazy.

“having planned”用法不当,应改为“having a plan”表示“有计划”;“Then”和“And of course”作为句首连接词使用合理,无需改动。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× I definitely prefer making lists on my phone becauses. It's convenient, I can shake all add anything easily.

I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I can easily add anything.

“becauses”拼写错误,应为“because”;“shake all add anything”语义不清,应改为“I can easily add anything”;句子中用分号连接两个相关句子更合适。

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