Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I often make Alyssa when I shop because you know, I'm pushing the person that prepare the person that if I don't make up today I will feel nervous and I don't know how to do anything and won't do anything. So I think I must.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,表达混乱,缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议你直接回答问题,使用简单明了的句子,并提供具体原因或例子来支持你的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need and saves time. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a cake because I had a clear list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,没有具体说明是否制作工作清单以及清单是否有效。建议你详细说明是否制作清单,并解释清单对工作的帮助。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important deadlines.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答完全没有针对问题,缺乏内容。建议你直接回答问题,说明原因,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. For instance, my friend thinks lists are too restrictive.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答没有针对性,缺乏具体信息。建议你明确说明偏好,并解释原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.
× I often make Alyssa when I shop because you know, I'm pushing the person that prepare the person that if I don't make up today I will feel nervous and I don't know how to do anything and won't do anything. So I think I must.
✓ I often make a list when I shop because, you know, I'm reminding myself to prepare. If I don't make a list today, I will feel nervous and won't know how to do anything. So I think I must.
原句结构混乱,表达不清晰,缺少必要的连接词和正确的短语。应使用“make a list”而非“make Alyssa”,并且句子应分开表达不同的意思,避免长句导致理解困难。建议简化句子结构,明确表达意图。
× Yes, yes.
✓ Yes, I do.
回答问题时应使用完整句子,尤其是当问题是完整句时。简单的“Yes, yes.”不符合正式口语表达,缺少谓语动词,导致句子结构错误。建议使用“Yes, I do.”来完整回答。
× Yes.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary.
单独的“Yes.”无法回答“为什么有些人不喜欢列清单”的问题,缺少句子结构和内容。应给出完整的原因句子,避免句子结构错误。
× Yes, yes.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
回答偏好问题时,应使用完整句子表达具体偏好。简单的“Yes, yes.”缺少谓语和具体信息,导致句子结构错误。建议明确表达偏好。