List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议加强语法基础，尤其是时态和句子结构的正确使用。同时，回答应更简洁自然，避免重复和不连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me avoid forgetting anything. For example, last weekend I bought everything on my list without missing any items.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，建议练习完整句子的表达，注意主谓一致和时态。同时，回答应更具体，说明清单如何帮助节省时间。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I often forget important tasks. Making a list helps me save time by organizing my duties. I prepare the list the night before to plan my day better.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更正式的表达方式，避免断句不连贯。可以增加具体原因和例子，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they think it's unnecessary to write things down. They rely on their memory and believe they can remember everything without help.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不流畅且有语法错误，建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子更自然。同时，注意词汇搭配和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can easily add or delete items without wasting paper, and since I always carry my phone, I can check and update my list anytime.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go to shop becauses make a list can help me save that I'm lost.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because making a list can help me avoid getting lost.

句中“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go”后接动词时需用动名词形式表示活动。且“becauses make a list”结构错误，应改为“because making a list”，动词需用动名词形式作主语。

× For example last weekend I go to shop or both everything without missing anything because so for my shopping list.

✓ For example, last weekend I went shopping and bought everything without missing anything because of my shopping list.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式，“go”应改为“went”，“or both”应为“and bought”，且“because so for”结构错误，应改为“because of”。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I always forgets important tasks.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I always forget important tasks.

主语“I”后动词“forget”不加-s，第三人称单数才加-s。

× Big under make a list can help me save time.

✓ Making a list can help me save time.

“Big under make a list”无意义，应为“Making a list”，动名词作主语。

× I always make a list in the night before so that I can know.

✓ I always make a list the night before so that I can know what to do.

“in the night before”应为“the night before”，且句尾不完整，需补充内容使句子完整。

× Some people don't like making lists 'cause they think it's unnecessary to write down and they rely on.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary to write things down and they rely on memory.

“rely on”后应接名词，“memory”缺失，且“'cause”应正式写为“because”。

× They all memory.

✓ They rely on their memory.

“They all memory”结构不完整，缺少动词和介词，需改为完整表达。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone. Be 'cause it's more a convenience.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient.

“more a convenience”错误，应使用形容词“convenient”修饰主语。

× I can. Easily add or delete items without wasting any paper.

✓ I can easily add or delete items without wasting any paper.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句，副词“easily”应紧跟情态动词“can”后。

× And I always carry my phone with me. I can check on that the update.

✓ And I always carry my phone with me. I can check the updates on it.

“check on that the update”结构错误，应为“check the updates on it”，介词和代词使用不当。