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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, are you really make a list or before I go shopping and I think making a list can help me to clarify my goals and choose my dream products as soon as possible.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a list before I do something in my company since every day I have many tasks to do, so I have to write them down before I started to do anything that I can organize everything well.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Maybe there are two trusted they are bringing to remember everything important so that they don't want to take 1-2 take any nodes because they trust themselves can memorize everything.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I preferred to make a Lister. On my phone because I can take it to any places and don't have to bring an actual notebook.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并用连词连接支持细节,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me clarify what I need and choose the products quickly.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但句子较长且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子结构,并用连词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work because I have many tasks each day. Writing them down helps me organize everything well.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,影响理解。建议用简单句表达观点,并提供具体原因。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and believe they can remember everything important.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误,表达不够自然。建议注意时态和拼写,句子结构更完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can take it anywhere and don't need to carry a notebook.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, are you really make a list or before I go shopping and I think making a list can help me to clarify my goals and choose my dream products as soon as possible.

Yes, I really make a list before I go shopping, and I think making a list can help me clarify my goals and choose my dream products as soon as possible.

句子中“are you really make a list or before I go shopping”结构不正确,应该是“I really make a list before I go shopping”。这里错误地使用了“are you”导致句子结构混乱。建议去掉“are you”并调整句子结构,使其符合英语语法。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I usually make a list before I do something in my company since every day I have many tasks to do, so I have to write them down before I started to do anything that I can organize everything well.

Yes, I usually make a list before I do something in my company since every day I have many tasks to do, so I have to write them down before I start to do anything so that I can organize everything well.

句中“before I started to do anything”时态错误,前文为一般现在时,应该保持时态一致,改为“before I start to do anything”。建议注意时态一致性,尤其在描述习惯性动作时使用一般现在时。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Maybe there are two trusted they are bringing to remember everything important so that they don't want to take 1-2 take any nodes because they trust themselves can memorize everything.

Maybe there are two reasons: they trust their memory to remember everything important, so they don't want to take any notes because they trust themselves to memorize everything.

句中“two trusted they are bringing”表达不清且语法错误,应为“two reasons”。“take 1-2 take any nodes”应为“take any notes”。此外,“trust themselves can memorize”缺少不定式“to”,应为“trust themselves to memorize”。建议使用正确的名词和短语,注意不定式的使用。

Past tense issue

× I preferred to make a Lister. On my phone because I can take it to any places and don't have to bring an actual notebook.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can take it to any place and don't have to bring an actual notebook.

句中“preferred”使用了过去式,但表达的是现在的偏好,应使用一般现在时“prefer”。“Lister”应为“list”,“any places”应为“any place”。建议注意时态的正确使用和单复数形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PossibleFeasible; Conceivable; Potential
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