List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和拼写错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need and improves my efficiency.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构不够流畅，建议使用正确的时态并简化表达，使回答更自然连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make a to-do list before I start working. At the beginning of each day, I write down the tasks I need to complete and then follow the list.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并避免重复和不连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I'm not sure why some people don't like making lists. Maybe they think it's too complicated and prefer to start working right away instead of planning.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议注意句子结构和词汇使用，使表达更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient to carry. For example, when I go to the library or a cafe, I just bring my phone instead of paper.

× Definitely yes 'cause I think when we make a list before our sharp, it's can really help us.

✓ Definitely yes, 'cause I think when we make a list before our shopping, it can really help us.

这里's can'是不正确的，应该是'it can'，因为主语是单数的'it'，而且's'是多余的。'sharp'应为'shopping'，是拼写错误。

× Realize what is necessary for us or what what is a purpose to go shopping today an.

✓ It helps us realize what is necessary for us or what the purpose of going shopping today is.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整。需要补充主语'It'和谓语'helps'，并调整句子结构使其完整。

× Also can improve our efficiency. When we were shocked.

✓ It can also improve our efficiency when we go shopping.

原句缺少主语，且'When we were shocked'不符合语境，应为'when we go shopping'。需要合并句子使其通顺。

× Yes, I really like to make A to do list before I started my working.

✓ Yes, I really like to make a to-do list before I start working.

这里时态不一致，'before I started'应改为一般现在时'before I start'，因为表达的是习惯性动作。

× Yes, I really like to make A to do list before I started my working.

✓ Yes, I really like to make a to-do list before I start working.

'A to do list'中'to do list'应连写为'to-do list'，且首字母小写。

× For example, at the beginning of the day I always will write What should I do during these days and after that I will then just to start it follow the list that I write on the To Do List.

✓ For example, at the beginning of the day, I always write what I should do during the day, and after that, I just start to follow the list that I wrote on the to-do list.

原句中词序混乱，'What should I do'应改为'what I should do'，'will then just to start it follow'不正确，应调整为'just start to follow'。

× 'Cause I like to make him less to so I'm not really sure why.

✓ 'Cause I like to make lists, so I'm not really sure why.

'him less to'是错误的，应该是'make lists'，即制作清单。

× Other people don't like making list, but I guess maybe they think is too complex to making list in this thing that if I have just making this the time, why don't you just why don't just get started my job job or get started my working?

✓ Other people don't like making lists, but I guess maybe they think it is too complex to make lists. If I have just made the list, why don't you just get started on your job or start working?

'making list'应为'making lists'，'think is'缺少主语，应为'think it is'，'to making list'应为'to make lists'，'get started my job job'应为'get started on your job'。

× If I have just making this the time, why don't you just why don't just get started my job job or get started my working?

✓ If I have just made the list, why don't you just get started on your job or start working?

'get started my job'应为'get started on your job'，动词短语需要介词'on'。

× I prefer making list on my phone because it's more convenient and easy carry carrying out, for example if I want to hang out.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easy to carry, for example, if I want to hang out.

'making list'应为'making lists'，'easy carry carrying out'表达不正确，应为'easy to carry'。

× Like writing my work on a library or on a topic cafeteria, I might just to carry your phone and no need to carry any any more paper to write list.

✓ Like writing my work in a library or in a campus cafeteria, I might just carry my phone and don't need to carry any more paper to write lists.

'on a library'应为'in a library'，'on a topic cafeteria'应为'in a campus cafeteria'，'just to carry your phone'应为'just carry my phone'，代词错误。