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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

No. I don't know my Callisto one night going shop, we called, I will. Memory. Something so. By my brain but so if I need to buy medicines I will make a list. Because I.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I your lane Michael list for my work because I can organize my tasks and. Avoid are forgotten some important sense. Answer. If I have too many sense, I can make a list.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

To be honest though, some people think are making a list is very rare. Unnecessary and young. Convenience is so they don't want to make a list, but. If they have many sense. Where would the need to make a list?

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think my phone is convenient and the access to ways so. I often make a list on my phone. Additionally, it can access to me and always will.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够连贯,表达不清晰,缺乏完整的句子结构。建议练习用简单明了的句子直接回答问题,并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need. However, if I need to buy medicines, I always make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and avoid forgetting important things. If I have many tasks, making a list is very useful.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议先给出直接回答,再用具体原因支持,并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it is unnecessary and inconvenient. However, when they have many things to do, they might realize that making a list is helpful.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,句子结构不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点,并用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and easy to access. Also, I can always carry my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No. I don't know my Callisto one night going shop, we called, I will. Memory. Something so. By my brain but so if I need to buy medicines I will make a list. Because I.

No. I don't usually make a list when I go shopping at night. But if I need to buy medicines, I will make a list because I want to remember.

原句结构混乱,缺少完整的句子,导致表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,明确表达意思。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I your lane Michael list for my work because I can organize my tasks and. Avoid are forgotten some important sense. Answer. If I have too many sense, I can make a list.

Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I can organize my tasks and avoid forgetting some important things. If I have too many things, I can make a list.

原句中代词使用错误,如“your lane Michael list”无意义,应改为“usually make a list”。另外,“are forgotten”应改为“forgetting”,使句子通顺。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× To be honest though, some people think are making a list is very rare. Unnecessary and young. Convenience is so they don't want to make a list, but. If they have many sense. Where would the need to make a list?

To be honest, some people think making a list is very rare, unnecessary, and inconvenient, so they don't want to make a list. But if they have many things, they would need to make a list.

原句中形容词使用错误,如“rare”与语境不符,应为“inconvenient”。句子断裂,需合并并调整形容词顺序。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think my phone is convenient and the access to ways so. I often make a list on my phone. Additionally, it can access to me and always will.

To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think my phone is convenient and easy to access. I often make a list on my phone. Additionally, it is always accessible to me.

原句中介词使用错误,如“access to ways”应改为“easy to access”,“can access to me”应改为“is accessible to me”。需要调整介词搭配使表达正确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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