List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'make a list' instead of 'make list'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list whenever I go shopping because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I visit Walmart or other grocery stores, there are many distractions, so having a list helps me focus on the items I need to buy.

Gợi ý: Your response needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and improve vocabulary for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work tasks, and they help me stay on track. For instance, when I receive assignments, I set alarms to remind me of deadlines, such as putting an alarm at 4:00 PM for paperwork due at 4:30 PM.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammar errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid negative or judgmental language; instead, explain reasons neutrally.

Ví dụ: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they might feel that lists restrict their flexibility during the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better organization and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Be concise and avoid unnecessary pauses or filler words.

Ví dụ: I like making lists both on paper and on my phone, but if I had to choose, I would prefer using my phone. This is because I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime without worrying about forgetting it.

× Yes, I often make list whenever I go outside because that.

✓ Yes, I often make a list whenever I go outside because that.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× there were so many of the things which distracts me

✓ there are so many things which distract me

The sentence refers to a general present situation, so 'there are' is correct instead of 'there were'. Also, 'distracts' should be 'distract' to agree with the plural subject 'things'.

× if you have a list that will help you and focus you on that items which I need to buy it so this.

✓ if you have a list, that will help you focus on the items you need to buy.

The pronouns and articles are misused. 'Focus you on that items' should be 'help you focus on the items'. Also, 'that items' is incorrect; 'the items' is correct. The sentence is also fragmented and needs restructuring.

× Well on my work are menninger always tell us what to do or what do not but whenever they give me some task I always make a list like I put the alarm for the things which we have to do on time as it is like for the paperwork I put alarm for 4:00 as its duet 430 answer.

✓ Well, at my work, the manager always tells us what to do or not to do, but whenever they give me a task, I always make a list. I set alarms for the things we have to do on time; for example, for paperwork, I set an alarm for 4:00 as it is due at 4:30.

Multiple issues: 'are menninger' should be 'the manager'; subject-verb agreement with 'manager tells'; 'what do not' should be 'what not to do'; 'put the alarm' should be 'set alarms'; 'its duet 430 answer' is unclear and corrected to 'due at 4:30'. Also, prepositions and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× Well, most of the people don't make the list because they don't want to work.

✓ Well, most people don't make lists because they don't want to work.

'Most of the people' is better as 'most people' for naturalness. 'Make the list' should be plural 'make lists' because it refers to lists in general.

× Because they're too lazy or they can follow the criteria which they have to make.

✓ Because they're too lazy or they can't follow the criteria they have to meet.

The phrase 'they can follow' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'they can't follow'. Also, 'criteria which they have to make' is incorrect; 'criteria they have to meet' is appropriate.

× Well, I like to make list on. Paper and on my phone too, but if I have to choose in between of them I'll go with.

✓ Well, I like to make lists on paper and on my phone too, but if I have to choose between them, I'll go with

'Make list' should be 'make lists' as it refers to the general activity. 'In between of them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'between them'.

× The phone option B kids whenever I have because wherever I go I just need to unlock my phone and saw the list because sometimes we can also forget to take that.

✓ The phone option because whenever I have it, wherever I go, I just need to unlock my phone and see the list, because sometimes we can also forget to take it.

The sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'option B kids' and 'saw the list'. Corrected to 'option because whenever I have it' and 'see the list'. Also, 'take that' should be 'take it' to refer correctly to the list.