List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "keep my time organized in" and instead say "save time" or "stay organized." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a grocery list before going shopping because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and fluency issues. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain the change and the benefit clearly in one or two sentences.

Ví dụ: At first, I didn't make to-do lists for work, but after my husband encouraged me, I started making one every morning. It really helps me stay organized throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like "however" or "but" properly and avoid fragmented sentences. Also, be more specific about reasons why some people dislike lists.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. However, I believe lists help organize the day and prevent forgetting important tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "on a paper" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use simpler expressions like "handwriting" instead of "write it with my own hands."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because handwriting helps improve my memory. Also, I can organize different lists on one page and check them easily.

× I have a habit of making grocery list before going to the store.

✓ I have a habit of making a grocery list before going to the store.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× This helps me to keep my time organized in.

✓ This helps me to keep my time organized.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context; 'keep my time organized' is the correct phrase.

× Also, I will not waste my time on unnecessary things.

✓ Also, I do not waste my time on unnecessary things.

Since the sentence refers to a habitual action, the simple present tense 'do not waste' is appropriate rather than the future tense 'will not waste'.

× Initially, I didn't have the habit of making A to do list, but later on in my life, with my husband's encouragement, I started making A to do list.

✓ Initially, I didn't have the habit of making a to-do list, but later on in my life, with my husband's encouragement, I started making a to-do list.

The phrase 'to do list' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'to-do' should be hyphenated as it is a compound adjective.

× That is the first thing I. Do every morning at it helps me too. Make my day organized.

✓ That is the first thing I do every morning as it helps me to make my day organized.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining the fragments into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people think that making a list is a waste of time, but The thing is, it helps us to organize our day in a well mannered.

✓ Some people think that making a list is a waste of time, but the thing is, it helps us to organize our day in a well-mannered way.

The phrase 'in a well mannered' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in a well-mannered way' or 'in a well-organized manner'.

× It also helps us. 2 Not to forget the things that we have to do daily.

✓ It also helps us not to forget the things that we have to do daily.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an extraneous '2'. Removing the period and '2' and combining the sentence improves grammatical correctness.

× I like writing on a paper. So I make a list on a paper.

✓ I like writing on paper, so I make a list on paper.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct idiomatic expression without the article 'a'.

× When I write it with my own hands, that will improve my memory and it also helps me to segregate different lists in a single paper where I can check everything at a time.

✓ When I write it with my own hands, it improves my memory and also helps me to segregate different lists on a single sheet of paper where I can check everything at once.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used; 'it' refers better to the action of writing. Also, 'at a time' should be 'at once'. 'In a single paper' is incorrect; 'on a single sheet of paper' is the correct phrase.