List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“more efficient”应为“more efficiently”，“making sure tips”表达不清晰。建议注意动词形式和短语搭配，避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the store because my memory is not very good. The list helps me remember what I need to buy, especially since I often shop for my mother and need to make sure I don't forget anything she asks for. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary trips.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“what should I do”应为“what I should do”，“handle tax 1 by 1”表达不明确。建议加强句子结构的准确性和用词的清晰度。

Ví dụ: Yes, I also make a list for my work because I need to know what I should do each day. It helps me manage my time efficiently and stay organized. As a student, I have many projects and assignments, so the list allows me to handle tasks one by one without feeling overwhelmed.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，如“making list”应为“making lists”，“result writing them down”表达错误。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，避免模糊表达。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they may find it redundant, especially if they have a good memory. They believe they can remember things well without writing them down, so making lists feels unnecessary. Additionally, some people prefer to rely on their intuition for mental organization rather than using extra tools.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如“the phone have a some apps”，“we are wherever you go”不合适。建议练习句子连贯性和正确的语法结构。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it acts like a memo for me. There are many apps that help you write and organize your tasks, and you can access them wherever you go. This way, I can easily check what I need to do anytime.

× The list helps me remember what I need to buy, specially since I often shop for my mother and needed to make make sure I don't forget anything she asks for.

✓ The list helps me remember what I need to buy, especially since I often shop for my mother and need to make sure I don't forget anything she asks for.

这里'specially'拼写错误，应为'especially'。另外，句中'needed'时态错误，应与前文保持一致用现在时'need'。此外，'make make sure'重复，应去掉一个'make'。

× This way I can shop more efficient and avoid making sure tips.

✓ This way I can shop more efficiently and avoid making mistakes.

'efficient'是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词形式'efficiently'。'making sure tips'表达不清，应为'making mistakes'表示避免犯错。

× Yes, I also make a list for my work because I need to know what should I do each day.

✓ Yes, I also make a list for my work because I need to know what I should do each day.

间接疑问句中，语序应为陈述语序，不能使用直接疑问句的倒装语序。

× As a student I have managed projects and assignments every day so they at least allows me to handle tax 1 by 1 without feeling over with them.

✓ As a student I have managed projects and assignments every day so they at least allow me to handle tasks one by one without feeling overwhelmed by them.

'they'指代复数，谓语动词应用复数形式'allow'。'tax'应为'task'。'1 by 1'应写为'one by one'。'feeling over with them'表达错误，应为'feeling overwhelmed by them'。

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list because they may find it redundant, especially if they have a good memory.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they may find it redundant, especially if they have a good memory.

'list'应为复数形式'lists'，因为泛指多次制作清单的行为。

× They believe that they can remember things well result writing them down, so making this feel unnecessary.

✓ They believe that they can remember things well without writing them down, so making this feels unnecessary.

'result'用法错误，应使用'without'表示不做某事。'making this feel'主语是单数，谓语动词应为'feels'。

× Additionally, some people prefer to rely on their intuition in the mental organization rather than extra ads.

✓ Additionally, some people prefer to rely on their intuition for mental organization rather than extra aids.

'in the mental organization'应改为'for mental organization'，表示依赖直觉来进行心理组织。'extra ads'应为'extra aids'，意为额外帮助。

× So I do like to make a list in my phone.

✓ So I do like to make a list on my phone.

表示在手机上制作清单，介词应使用'on'而非'in'。

× You know the phone have a some apps can help you to write, type some things in here and we are wherever you go.

✓ You know the phone has some apps that can help you write and type some things here wherever you go.

'phone'为单数，谓语动词应为'has'。'a some apps'错误，'some apps'即可。'can help you to write'中'help'后一般省略'to'。'and we are wherever you go'表达不清，改为'and type some things here wherever you go'。

× Well, you can take it and check what you should do.

✓ Well, you can take it and check what you need to do.

'should do'在此处不太合适，表达建议或义务，改为'need to do'更符合语境。