List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. Also, watch out for minor grammar mistakes like 'an purchasing' which should be 'and purchasing'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop to avoid forgetting important items and to stick to my budget. This helps me plan better and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'as he tells me' which seems out of context. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid confusing pronouns. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me prioritize important tasks. By planning ahead, I can focus on completing the most urgent jobs efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented and informal. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid slang like 'wanna' in formal speaking. Provide more specific reasons with explanations.

Ví dụ: I believe some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and feel that lists restrict their freedom to choose what to do at the moment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains incomplete sentences and some awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'or something like that' and be more specific.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can create or update my list anytime without needing to carry pen and paper, especially when I'm out in public.

× ...before browsing through the market an purchasing unnecessary things.

✓ ...before browsing through the market and purchasing unnecessary things.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two actions 'browsing' and 'purchasing'. Using 'an' here is incorrect as it is an article, not a conjunction.

× It works for me and it was so great that I always make sure to plan everything in my work or my shopping or anything related as he tells me to prioritize the important things...

✓ It works for me and it is so great that I always make sure to plan everything in my work or my shopping or anything related as he tells me to prioritize the important things...

The phrase 'it was so great' is inconsistent with the present tense context. Since the student is talking about a current habit, 'it is so great' is appropriate to maintain present tense consistency.

× Maybe because they don't wanna, maybe because they feel restrictive. Or tie down to the list instead of. Choosing their own freedom.

✓ Maybe because they don't want to, maybe because they feel restricted or tied down to the list instead of choosing their own freedom.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Feel restrictive' should be 'feel restricted' to correctly describe feelings. The phrase 'tie down to the list instead of. Choosing their own freedom.' is fragmented and should be combined into a complete sentence for clarity.

× I don't need to bring a pen or paper on our public places or something like that.

✓ I don't need to bring a pen or paper to public places or something like that.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to 'public places'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement or bringing something to a location.