Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a list for shopping, are usually remember in my mind, but sometimes I will, sometimes I will forget to buy some goods, so I think. It is so good. Happy to make a list for shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes. I make a list for my work, but it doesn't work because I don't want to. Go to on the task on the list. I usually just do some of. Then.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think maybe the less well make people stressful so. People don't want to make a list. Don't want to. Go through the list. And to achieve all the task.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient to. Immediately you write down what I want to do, what I want to buy.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤,建議你用簡潔且正確的句子表達,例如先直接回答問題,再說明原因。避免重複和不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I try to remember everything in my mind. However, sometimes I forget to buy some items, so I think making a list is a good idea.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整且語法錯誤,建議你用完整句子清楚表達你的想法,並用連接詞使句子更流暢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work, but it doesn't always work because I don't feel motivated to complete all the tasks. Usually, I only finish some of them.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答語法和邏輯不清楚,建議你用完整句子並用連接詞組織想法,說明原因並舉例。
Ví dụ: I think some people find making lists stressful because they feel pressured to complete all the tasks. Therefore, they avoid making lists to reduce stress.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答基本清楚,但句子結構不完整,建議用完整句子並加強連接詞,使表達更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I can immediately write down what I want to do or buy.
× No, I don't make a list for shopping, are usually remember in my mind, but sometimes I will, sometimes I will forget to buy some goods, so I think. It is so good. Happy to make a list for shopping.
✓ No, I don't make a list for shopping; I usually remember it in my mind, but sometimes I do. Sometimes I forget to buy some goods, so I think it is good to make a list for shopping.
The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and sentence fragments. Using a semicolon and proper conjunctions connects ideas clearly. Also, 'are usually remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually remember'. The sentence 'so I think. It is so good.' is fragmented and should be combined for clarity.
× Yes. I make a list for my work, but it doesn't work because I don't want to. Go to on the task on the list. I usually just do some of. Then.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work, but it doesn't work because I don't want to go to the tasks on the list. I usually just do some of them.
The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect conjunctions and prepositions. 'Go to on the task' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the tasks'. Also, 'I usually just do some of.' is incomplete; adding 'them' completes the thought.
× I think maybe the less well make people stressful so. People don't want to make a list. Don't want to. Go through the list. And to achieve all the task.
✓ I think maybe making lists makes people stressed, so people don't want to make a list or go through it to achieve all the tasks.
The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and sentence fragments. 'the less well make people stressful so' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rephrasing to 'making lists makes people stressed' clarifies the meaning. Also, combining sentences improves flow.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient to. Immediately you write down what I want to do, what I want to buy.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. You can immediately write down what I want to do and what I want to buy.
The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and sentence fragments. 'because it is more convenient to.' is incomplete; removing 'to' and ending the sentence improves correctness. Also, splitting into two sentences clarifies the idea.