Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes. I make list when I go for the shopping. Because I. I think that's very easy and convenient way. To never forget anything from your list an. It is very convenient and it. Keep me in budget.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love to make list for my work. And it always worked for me. It always keep me on track. I can stay organized and. More faster with the help of the list.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like to make list. Maybe they have. Good memory and they think. Making list is a waste of time and. Also they think. If they make list. That and unnecessary. Think for them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Usually I prefer to make the list on my phone. I think it very convenient. Whenever I need I can check the list instant in my phone. Fine. But sometimes when I don't have my phone nearby. So I use paper and pen to make my list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by combining short sentences and correcting grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, instead of saying 'I make list when I go for the shopping. Because I. I think that's very easy and convenient way,' you could say 'Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything and stay within my budget.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and keeps me within my budget.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Yes, I love to make list for my work. And it always worked for me,' say 'Yes, I love making lists for my work because they help me stay organized and work more efficiently.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I love making lists for my work because they help me stay organized and work more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Focus on making your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and think it's a waste of time. They may also feel that lists limit their thinking.'
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and think it's a waste of time. They may also feel that lists limit their thinking.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent by combining sentences and correcting grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient; I can check them instantly whenever I need. However, if I don't have my phone nearby, I use paper and pen instead.'
Ví dụ: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient; I can check them instantly whenever I need. However, if I don't have my phone nearby, I use paper and pen instead.
× Yes. I make list when I go for the shopping.
✓ Yes. I make a list when I go shopping.
The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'go for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. This correction ensures proper singular noun usage and natural phrasing.
× Because I. I think that's very easy and convenient way.
✓ Because I think that's a very easy and convenient way.
The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'way' is a singular countable noun and requires the article 'a' before it.
× To never forget anything from your list an.
✓ To never forget anything from your list.
The word 'an' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase 'from your list' is correct, so removing 'an' fixes the sentence.
× It is very convenient and it. Keep me in budget.
✓ It is very convenient and it keeps me within budget.
The sentence is fragmented and the verb 'keep' should be in third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'in budget' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'within budget'.
× Yes, I love to make list for my work.
✓ Yes, I love to make lists for my work.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making lists for work. This correction aligns with natural usage.
× And it always worked for me.
✓ And it always works for me.
The question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'works' is appropriate instead of past tense 'worked'.
× It always keep me on track.
✓ It always keeps me on track.
The verb 'keep' must be in third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.
× I can stay organized and. More faster with the help of the list.
✓ I can stay organized and be faster with the help of the list.
The sentence is fragmented and 'more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is already a comparative form; 'more' is unnecessary. The corrected sentence uses 'be faster' to express the idea properly.
× Some people don't like to make list.
✓ Some people don't like to make lists.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making lists.
× Maybe they have. Good memory and they think.
✓ Maybe they have good memory and they think.
The sentence is fragmented; combining the parts into one sentence improves clarity.
× Making list is a waste of time and.
✓ Making lists is a waste of time.
The sentence is fragmented and 'list' should be plural 'lists'. Removing the unnecessary 'and' completes the sentence properly.
× Also they think. If they make list.
✓ Also, they think if they make lists,
The sentence is fragmented and 'list' should be plural 'lists'. Combining the parts and adding commas improves sentence flow.
× That and unnecessary. Think for them.
✓ that is an unnecessary thing for them.
The original is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence with proper structure and word choice.
× Usually I prefer to make the list on my phone.
✓ Usually I prefer to make the list on my phone.
This sentence is correct as 'the list' refers to a specific list, so no correction needed.
× I think it very convenient.
✓ I think it is very convenient.
The verb 'is' is missing between 'it' and 'very convenient'. Adding 'is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.
× Whenever I need I can check the list instant in my phone.
✓ Whenever I need, I can check the list instantly on my phone.
The sentence is missing a comma after 'need'. 'Instant' should be the adverb 'instantly'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to a phone.
× Fine. But sometimes when I don't have my phone nearby.
✓ Fine. But sometimes, when I don't have my phone nearby,
The sentence is incomplete and fragmented. Adding commas and completing the sentence improves clarity.
× So I use paper and pen to make my list.
✓ So I use paper and pen to make my list.
This sentence is correct and needs no correction.