Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Not really, I usually going chop. I don't take a list when I. 1-2 Some buy new things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Uh, usually yes, a cows. I know what I am doing now and after what do I eat? And it helps me and I'm listing my time. And stress, don't rest.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I was making with helps peoples are doing there. Showers an day now don't know it makes list it helps organize it there doing work or.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Usually a I make a list which paper cows I. Listen to music on my phone and usually cleaning home and I make list which paper Pickles I correct I don't which char I.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences, for example, say 'No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I buy only a few things.'
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy a few things each time. However, if I need many items, I sometimes write a list to remember everything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain how making a list helps you. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and reduce stress.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. Also, it reduces my stress since I know what to do next and can manage my time better.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or think it wastes time.'
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or think it wastes time. Also, they may prefer to remember tasks in their mind instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly state your preference. Try to answer directly and give reasons. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier to write and see.'
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier to write and see. Also, I can carry the paper anywhere without worrying about my phone's battery.
× Not really, I usually going chop.
✓ Not really, I usually go shopping.
The verb 'going' is incorrectly used here. After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used. Also, 'chop' is likely a misspelling of 'shop'. The correct form is 'I usually go shopping'. Suggestion: Use the base verb form after adverbs of frequency and correct spelling.
× I don't take a list when I.
✓ I don't take a list when I shop.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks the main verb after 'I'. The verb 'shop' should be added to complete the sentence. Suggestion: Always ensure sentences have a subject and a verb to be complete.
× Some buy new things.
✓ Sometimes I buy new things.
'Some' is incorrectly used here; the intended word is likely 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' to express occasional actions.
× Uh, usually yes, a cows.
✓ Uh, usually yes, of course.
The phrase 'a cows' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'of course'. Suggestion: Use correct fixed expressions.
× I know what I am doing now and after what do I eat?
✓ I know what I am doing now and what I will do after.
The sentence is awkward and incorrectly structured. 'After what do I eat?' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Suggestion: Use clear and correct sentence structures to express sequence of actions.
× And it helps me and I'm listing my time.
✓ And it helps me manage my time.
'I'm listing my time' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely managing or organizing time. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs to express managing time.
× And stress, don't rest.
✓ And it reduces stress; I don't feel restless.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It likely means that making lists reduces stress and helps rest. Suggestion: Use complete sentences to clearly express ideas.
× I was making with helps peoples are doing there.
✓ I was making lists which help people with their work.
The sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Peoples' should be 'people', and the structure needs correction. Suggestion: Use correct plural forms and clear sentence structure.
× Showers an day now don't know it makes list it helps organize it there doing work or.
✓ Some people nowadays don't know that making lists helps organize their work.
The sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear meaning. 'Showers an day' is incorrect; 'some people nowadays' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and clearer expressions.
× Usually a I make a list which paper cows I.
✓ Usually, I make a list on paper.
The sentence is jumbled and contains incorrect words like 'cows'. Suggestion: Use simple and clear sentence structures.
× Listen to music on my phone and usually cleaning home and I make list which paper Pickles I correct I don't which char I.
✓ I listen to music on my phone while cleaning at home, and I usually make a list on paper. I don't use my phone for lists.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains many unclear words. The correction clarifies the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use clear and complete sentences to express ideas.