List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan kosakata yang salah dan buat kalimat lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan aktivitas membuat daftar belanja.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. By making a list, I ensure that I don't forget any important items, and it also helps me save time.

Gợi ý: Jawaban kurang relevan dengan pertanyaan tentang membuat daftar untuk pekerjaan. Perlu menjawab langsung dan memberikan detail spesifik tentang manfaat membuat daftar dalam konteks pekerjaan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important deadlines, which improves my productivity.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan alami.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, but maybe some people prefer to shop spontaneously when they feel like it. Also, making a list might make them feel stressed or restricted.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki kesalahan kata dan buat kalimat lebih jelas dan alami. Jelaskan alasan preferensi dengan contoh yang relevan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to use. For example, I can quickly add or remove items, and since I always have my phone with me, it's more practical.

× Yes, I usually necklace before I go shopping because I'm not good at remembering things so by making leash.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I'm not good at remembering things, so I make a list.

The word 'necklace' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'make' followed by the noun 'list'. Also, 'leash' is a wrong word; it should be 'list'. The verb 'make' should be used with the noun 'list' to express the action of preparing a list before shopping.

× But by making a list, I make sure that I don't forget to buy any important items and it helps me to save time as well.

✓ By making a list, I make sure that I don't forget to buy any important items, and it helps me save time as well.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'helps me to save time' can be simplified to 'helps me save time' for better fluency. The use of 'making' as a gerund is correct here.

× Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I'm not good at remembering things. So by making least it helps me to save time to make sure that I don't forget any important items.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I'm not good at remembering things. So by making a list, it helps me save time and make sure that I don't forget any important items.

The word 'least' is a typo and should be 'list'. The phrase 'helps me to save time to make sure' is awkward; it should be 'helps me save time and make sure'. The gerund 'making' is correctly used here.

× So it's very helpful to me an I don't need to waste time by up.

✓ So it's very helpful to me, and I don't need to waste time looking for things.

The sentence has a typo 'an' instead of 'and' and the phrase 'waste time by up' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'waste time looking for things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Maybe some people don't like to make a list because they just like something spontaneously when they arise, looks something and they need, it's important they buy it.

✓ Maybe some people don't like to make a list because they just like to do things spontaneously when they arise, see something they need, and if it's important, they buy it.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect structure. 'Like something spontaneously when they arise' is unclear; it should be 'like to do things spontaneously when they arise'. Also, 'looks something and they need' should be 'see something they need'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And they don't like make a list because maybe it makes them stressful.

✓ And they don't like to make a list because maybe it makes them stressed.

The phrase 'makes them stressful' is incorrect; 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, not a feeling. The correct adjective is 'stressed' to describe how they feel. Also, 'like make' should be 'like to make'.

× Of course they prefer Michael is on my phone because it is more convenient and easier.

✓ Of course, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easier.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they' and 'Michael is' which seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct pronoun is 'I' as the speaker is talking about their preference. 'Michael is' should be 'making lists' or 'making a list'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and word choice.

× For instance, I can quickly add or remove items an I'm with my phone every time so it's more practice.

✓ For instance, I can quickly add or remove items, and I'm with my phone all the time, so it's more practical.

The sentence has a typo 'an' instead of 'and'. The phrase 'I'm with my phone every time' is awkward; 'I'm with my phone all the time' is better. 'More practice' is incorrect; the intended word is 'more practical' to describe convenience.