Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
It depends on how many things I want to buy. If Denise is known, I really make a shopping list to make sure I don't forget anything. This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary time items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely, especially at that, at that period. I have many things to do everyday I should work he and I should balance my work and study so at that time I will make nest to make sure I. I'm not scared, anything I need to do every day.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I guess maybe they think. They don't like this like like a ruiner 2. Named to the damn actions and activities every day.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Uh, for me I think a mechanism on my phone is more. Convenience because I can check it. Because I can check check it anytime if I want about sometimes if the new sales too much and I will make it on the paper because when I'm.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“Denise is known”可能是口误或拼写错误,且“unnecessary time items”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构,避免重复和模糊表达。
Ví dụ: It depends on how many items I need to buy. Usually, I make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱,表达不连贯,且有多处口误和不完整句子。建议练习句子结构,使用简单明了的句子表达观点,并确保回答连贯完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I have many tasks. It helps me balance my work and study, and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,难以理解。建议先理清思路,用简单句表达观点,避免使用不准确或错误的词汇。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom or makes their day too rigid.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,存在重复和语法错误。建议练习完整表达观点,使用连贯的句子,并明确说明偏好及原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check it anytime. However, if there are many sales, I sometimes write lists on paper to keep track more easily.
× If Denise is known, I really make a shopping list to make sure I don't forget anything.
✓ If the items are known, I really make a shopping list to make sure I don't forget anything.
这里'singular and plural issue',原句中'Denise'可能是误写,应为复数形式的'items',表示购物的物品。单复数不匹配导致句意不清。建议使用复数形式以符合语境。
× This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary time items.
✓ This helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.
这里'Incorrect use of quantifiers','unnecessary time items'表达不正确,'time'修饰'items'不合适,应去掉'time',使表达更准确。
× Yes, definitely, especially at that, at that period. I have many things to do everyday I should work he and I should balance my work and study so at that time I will make nest to make sure I. I'm not scared, anything I need to do every day.
✓ Yes, definitely, especially during that period. I have many things to do every day. I should work hard and balance my work and study, so at that time I will make a list to make sure I am not scared of forgetting anything I need to do every day.
这里存在多个句子结构错误,如重复词语、缺少连词、拼写错误('nest'应为'list'),以及句子不完整。需要拆分句子,补充缺失部分,调整词序,使句子通顺。
× I should work he and I should balance my work and study so at that time I will make nest to make sure I.
✓ I should work hard and I should balance my work and study, so at that time I will make a list to make sure I...
这里'Incorrect use of pronouns','work he'显然是错误的代词使用,应为'work hard',且句子不完整,需修正代词和补全句子。
× I guess maybe they think. They don't like this like like a ruiner 2. Named to the damn actions and activities every day.
✓ I guess maybe they think they don't like this, like it ruins their routine and the planned actions and activities every day.
句子结构混乱,存在断句错误和词语误用('ruiner 2. Named to the damn actions'无意义),需要重组句子,使其表达清晰。
× I guess maybe they think. They don't like this like like a ruiner 2. Named to the damn actions and activities every day.
✓ I guess maybe they think they don't like this because it ruins their daily routines and planned actions.
原句中'ruiner 2. Named to the damn actions'是错误的量词和词语搭配,应改为'ruins their daily routines and planned actions',使表达合理。
× Uh, for me I think a mechanism on my phone is more. Convenience because I can check it.
✓ Uh, for me I think a mechanism on my phone is more convenient because I can check it.
'more convenience'是错误的形容词用法,应使用形容词'convenient',而非名词'convenience'。
× Because I can check check it anytime if I want about sometimes if the new sales too much and I will make it on the paper because when I'm.
✓ Because I can check it anytime I want. Sometimes if there are too many new sales, I will make it on paper because when I'm...
原句中'if the new sales too much'量词使用错误,应为'too many new sales',且句子不完整,需补全。