List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating phrases. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by saying, for example, "I make a list when I shop to avoid buying unnecessary items, which helps me save money."

Ví dụ: I usually make a shopping list to avoid buying things I don't need, which helps me save money and stay organized.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clarify your job role and explain how making lists helps you. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I make lists for my work because I am an accountant and also create videos. Making lists helps me organize topics and plan my tasks effectively."

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because I am an accountant and also create videos. Making lists helps me organize topics and plan my tasks effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references. Avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, explain reasons more clearly and use linking words. For example, "Some people, like my father, dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and feel it limits their motivation at work."

Ví dụ: Some people, like my father, dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and feel it limits their motivation at work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. After completing tasks, I usually check them off to keep track."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. After completing tasks, I usually check them off to keep track.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because sometimes I brought some unusual things that don't need in my everyday life.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because sometimes I buy some unusual things that I don't need in my everyday life.

The verb 'brought' is the past tense of 'bring' and is incorrectly used here. The correct verb should be 'buy' in the present tense to match the context. Also, 'don't need' lacks the object 'I' before it, so it should be 'that I don't need'.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because sometimes I brought some unusual things that don't need in my everyday life.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because sometimes I buy some unusual things that I don't need in my everyday life.

The phrase 'don't need in my everyday life' is missing the pronoun 'I' before 'don't need' to clarify the subject. Including 'I' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× For example it's my father don't don't like to make any list when he worked up because it's a time consuming an she have to follow so many things and she cannot motivate on his work.

✓ For example, my father doesn't like to make any list when he wakes up because it's time-consuming and he has to follow so many things and he cannot stay motivated in his work.

There are multiple pronoun errors: 'it's my father don't don't like' should be 'my father doesn't like'; 'she have' should be 'he has' to match the subject 'father'; 'she cannot motivate on his work' should be 'he cannot stay motivated in his work'. Also, 'worked up' should be 'wakes up'. These corrections ensure subject-pronoun agreement and proper verb forms.

× For example it's my father don't don't like to make any list when he worked up because it's a time consuming an she have to follow so many things and she cannot motivate on his work.

✓ For example, my father doesn't like to make any list when he wakes up because it's time-consuming and he has to follow so many things and he cannot stay motivated in his work.

The phrase 'worked up' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'wakes up' to indicate the time of day. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I like to make my list on paper because when I write down this on my paper, I remember every single thing an it's help me help me to remember what I need.

✓ I like to make my list on paper because when I write this down on my paper, I remember every single thing and it helps me to remember what I need.

The pronoun 'this' should be placed before 'down' as 'write this down'. Also, 'it's help me help me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'. The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.