List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using simple linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items. For example, I write down all the things I need before going to the store, so I can shop efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Provide a direct answer first, then explain with a specific example using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks. For example, when I list my daily duties, I can complete them more quickly and avoid forgetting anything.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. For instance, they believe that making lists can be restrictive and prefer to handle tasks as they come.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Give a clear preference with reasons and use linking words to explain your choice.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because paper is more reliable and easier to use. Also, I can quickly write and see everything without worrying about battery life.

× Yes, I usually make a list while shopping because it helped me to be more.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list while shopping because it helps me to be more efficient.

The sentence mixes present tense 'usually make' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain tense consistency, 'helped' should be changed to present tense 'helps' because the action is habitual.

× More usual useful and save my time.

✓ It is more useful and saves my time.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It is' and adjusting verbs to agree with the subject corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, doing well doing it.

✓ Well, I am doing it well.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding subject and verb clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× And also. Also.

✓ Also.

Redundant use of 'And also' and 'Also' is unnecessary. Using a single 'Also' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Yeah, well, working.

✓ Yeah, well, when working,

The phrase 'well, working' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'when' clarifies the context and improves sentence structure.

× I think it's quite reliable. To make a list.

✓ I think making a list is quite reliable.

Splitting the sentence into two fragments is incorrect. Combining them into a single sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, all if you if you work like if you.

✓ For example, if you work,

The original sentence is repetitive and incomplete. Simplifying it to a clear conditional clause corrects the structure.

× Make a list, it will save your time.

✓ making a list, it will save your time.

The phrase should be a gerund to connect properly with the previous clause. Changing 'Make' to 'making' corrects the sentence.

× Like people have their own perspective while making it or not like.

✓ People have their own perspective about making lists or not.

The original sentence uses 'it' ambiguously and has awkward phrasing. Clarifying the object and rephrasing improves pronoun use and clarity.

× I believe that. Some people Don. Want to make it least like some God like strong mindset which help them to be more busy.

✓ I believe that some people don't want to make lists because they have a strong mindset that keeps them busy.

The sentence has pronoun errors ('Don' instead of 'don't', 'it least like some God like') and unclear meaning. Correcting pronouns and rephrasing clarifies the intended message.

× With this state.

✓ At this stage,

The phrase 'With this state' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'At this stage' to indicate the current point in time.

× I usually prefer to make a list or paper rather than form.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone.

The original sentence misuses 'or' and 'form' (likely 'phone'). Correcting quantifiers and word choice clarifies the preference.

× Because. I think. Oh. Paper Paper work is more efficient and more more reliable rather than 4.

✓ Because I think paperwork is more efficient and more reliable than using a phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition and unclear words ('4' instead of 'phone'). Combining fragments and correcting words improves clarity and grammar.