List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure your vocabulary is appropriate and your ideas are logically connected. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and finish with a benefit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me buy only what I need and avoid unnecessary items. As a result, I save both time and money.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Try to explain how making a list helps you with your work in a simple and direct way.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list of tasks for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete my work more efficiently. Therefore, making a list is very beneficial for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas in simple sentences and explain reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to follow their own schedule. Also, they may find lists boring and feel restricted by them.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Try to explain your preference clearly and give specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Also, I can set reminders, which helps me remember important tasks on time.

× Whenever a group of former shopping at definitely love to make list of things becaused by making list I can.

✓ Whenever a group of former shoppers definitely love to make a list of things because by making a list I can.

The phrase 'former shopping at' is incorrect; it should be 'former shoppers' to indicate people who shop. Also, 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used here; it should be a noun 'shoppers'.

× Whenever a group of former shopping at definitely love to make list of things becaused by making list I can.

✓ Whenever a group of former shoppers definitely love to make a list of things because by making a list I can.

The phrase 'make list of things' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article.

× Legally buy the things that I want and always avoid the unnecessary shopping and save a lot of mine that this step.

✓ I can legally buy the things that I want, always avoid unnecessary shopping, and save a lot of money by this step.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'Legally buy' needs a subject 'I'. 'Mine' is incorrect; it should be 'money'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be restructured for clarity.

× I can. Legally buy the things that I want and always avoid the unnecessary shopping and save a lot of mine that this step.

✓ I can legally buy the things that I want, always avoid unnecessary shopping, and save a lot of money by this step.

The word 'mine' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'money' to indicate the amount saved.

× I always make this stuff my work.

✓ I always make this list for my work.

The phrase 'make this stuff my work' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is to make a list related to work, so 'make this list for my work' is appropriate.

× And it works really well because after making a list of my work, I can get done work with more patience to the Edward more clearly.

✓ And it works really well because after making a list of my work, I can get the work done more patiently and more clearly.

The phrase 'get done work' is incorrect; it should be 'get the work done'. 'With more patience to the Edward more clearly' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'more patiently and more clearly' to convey the intended meaning.

× As far as I'm concerned, there are lot of reasons why some people quite of making list question for mostly when instead by making this, they have this take according to their timetable.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, there are a lot of reasons why some people quit making lists, mostly because they prefer to follow their own timetable.

The phrase 'there are lot of reasons' is missing the article 'a'. 'Quite of making list question' is incorrect; it should be 'quit making lists'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× So sometimes some people cannot always trick to the same type temp table and get bored easily after falling for some hearts.

✓ So sometimes some people cannot always stick to the same type of timetable and get bored easily after following it for some time.

'Trick to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stick to'. 'Temp table' should be 'timetable'. 'Falling for some hearts' is unclear; likely intended as 'following it for some time'.

× According to my perspective, I love to make the list too and my guy just becaused by my gadget is always in my hand.

✓ From my perspective, I love to make the list on my phone because my gadget is always in my hand.

'My guy' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone' or 'my gadget'. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'According to my perspective' is better expressed as 'From my perspective'.

× Secondly. By making a list on my gadget I can also send reminders which is quite beneficial and I cannot remember the important things on time.

✓ Secondly, by making a list on my gadget, I can also send reminders, which is quite beneficial because I cannot remember important things on time.

The original sentence is fragmented with a period after 'Secondly'. It needs to be combined into one sentence with proper commas. Also, 'the important things' is better as 'important things' here.