Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I will make a checklist before I go to the more or go shopping and I will write down To Do List and what I would want to boy and will I need to buy and what I want to buy and then I will go to the. Shopping more with my list and then I will without buying something used.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will like my list for my work because I'm a lazy prison. If don't make on this I will. I will suffer and. Praying the phone, if I write the list, the checklist and To Do List I will follow the step or I need to do a in a day an successfully.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because there are busy and think that making a list before doing the. Doing something is useless and he spent a lot of time and they are, so they will do the stuff by their own without using the list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Oh. List my. Countless Oh my paper on the paper because I have a lot of memo book and minimalist and if I use. Default I will close it up this concentrate and I will play the phone without.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用正确的词汇表达购物清单的习惯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. This helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不连贯,建议使用简单句子直接回答问题,并说明制作工作清单的好处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为模糊,建议明确表达原因,使用连贯的句子,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy and feel it wastes time. They prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,建议清晰说明偏好,并给出理由,避免断句错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because I like writing by hand and it helps me focus better than using my phone.
× Yes I will make a checklist before I go to the more or go shopping and I will write down To Do List and what I would want to boy and will I need to buy and what I want to buy and then I will go to the. Shopping more with my list and then I will without buying something used.
✓ Yes, I make a checklist before I go to the store or go shopping, and I write down a To-Do List of what I want to buy and what I need to buy. Then I go to the shopping mall with my list and I won't buy anything unnecessary.
这里的情境是描述习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时而非将来时的“will”。“will”表示将来,而此处表达的是通常的做法。建议用一般现在时表达习惯行为。
× Yes I will make a checklist before I go to the more or go shopping and I will write down To Do List and what I would want to boy and will I need to buy and what I want to buy and then I will go to the. Shopping more with my list and then I will without buying something used.
✓ Yes, I will make a checklist before I go to the store or go shopping, and I will write down a To-Do List of what I want to buy and what I need to buy. Then I will go to the shopping mall with my list and then I will avoid buying unnecessary things.
原句中“more”应为“store”或“mall”,且“something used”表达不清,应改为“unnecessary things”。此外,“To Do List”前应加冠词“a”,且“boy”应为“buy”。这些都是单复数和词形错误。
× Yes I will like my list for my work because I'm a lazy prison. If don't make on this I will. I will suffer and. Praying the phone, if I write the list, the checklist and To Do List I will follow the step or I need to do a in a day an successfully.
✓ Yes, I like to use my list for my work because I'm a lazy person. If I don't make one, I will suffer and keep procrastinating. If I write the list, the checklist, and To-Do List, I will follow the steps I need to do in a day successfully.
“like my list for my work”应为“like to use my list for my work”,动词搭配错误;“praying the phone”应为“procrastinating”;“make on this”应为“make one”。介词和词语搭配错误导致句意不清。
× Because there are busy and think that making a list before doing the. Doing something is useless and he spent a lot of time and they are, so they will do the stuff by their own without using the list.
✓ Because they are busy and think that making a list before doing something is useless and takes a lot of time, so they will do the stuff on their own without using a list.
“there are busy”应为“they are busy”,代词错误;“he spent a lot of time and they are”句子不完整,应改为“takes a lot of time”;“by their own”应为“on their own”。单复数和介词使用错误。
× Oh. List my. Countless Oh my paper on the paper because I have a lot of memo book and minimalist and if I use. Default I will close it up this concentrate and I will play the phone without.
✓ Oh, I prefer to make my list on paper because I have a lot of memo books and I am a minimalist. If I use my phone, I will get distracted and play with it instead.
“Countless Oh my paper on the paper”语义不清,应简化为“prefer to make my list on paper”;“close it up this concentrate”应为“lose concentration”;“play the phone”应为“play with the phone”。介词和表达错误导致句子不通顺。