List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent. Évitez les répétitions et les phrases incomplètes.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. This way, I can be more flexible and open to new ideas, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et des mots inappropriés. Veuillez structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails précis. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la fluidité.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because I have many tasks to complete. Making a list helps me stay organized and feel more relaxed while working.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause de la grammaire et du vocabulaire incorrects. Essayez de répondre directement avec une phrase claire et des détails spécifiques, en utilisant des mots de liaison pour la cohérence.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find planning in advance time-consuming and prefer to be spontaneous.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est assez claire et bien structurée, mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en utilisant plus de mots de liaison et en corrigeant quelques erreurs mineures de vocabulaire.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because phones can be distracting due to notifications. Writing things down on paper helps me focus better and remember tasks more effectively.

× Actually, I really do not make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to shop spontanously.

✓ Actually, I really do not make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to shop spontaneously.

The word 'spontanously' is a misspelling of the adverb 'spontaneously'. Using the correct adverb form is necessary to modify the verb 'shop' properly.

× Since I don't have, I don't shop on the regular basis.

✓ Since I don't have a list, I don't shop on a regular basis.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the object after 'don't have'. Adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'on the regular basis' should be 'on a regular basis' to be grammatically correct.

× I found it more enjoyable. True true things.

✓ I find it more enjoyable to buy true things.

The sentence 'True true things' is unclear and likely a transcription error. Changing 'found' to 'find' matches the present tense context, and clarifying the phrase improves meaning.

× On the spur of the moment rather than following a strict plan.

✓ I shop on the spur of the moment rather than following a strict plan.

This is a sentence fragment missing a subject and verb. Adding 'I shop' completes the sentence.

× This way I can be more flexible and open to new ideas while she.

✓ This way I can be more flexible and open to new ideas while shopping.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used here. It should be replaced with a gerund or phrase that fits the context, such as 'shopping'.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work because every day I had too many things to Cowboys so making making a list will give me a sense of regulation.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work because every day I have too many things to do, so making a list gives me a sense of regulation.

The verb 'had' should be present tense 'have' to match 'every day'. 'Cowboys' is likely a mishearing of 'do'. Also, 'making making' is a repetition error. 'Will give' should be 'gives' to maintain present tense consistency.

× It makes me relaxed when I do some things.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed when I do some things.

The adjective 'relaxed' needs the verb 'feel' to correctly express the state. 'Makes me relaxed' is incorrect without 'feel'.

× Will the reason why some people don't like making this is that.

✓ The reason why some people don't like making lists is that.

'Will' is incorrectly used at the start of the sentence. The sentence should start with 'The reason' to form a correct statement.

× They may think making arrangements in advance for them is very people taking, so they don't like to do that.

✓ They may think making arrangements in advance is very time-consuming, so they don't like to do that.

'People taking' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'time-consuming'. The adjective 'time-consuming' correctly describes the activity.

× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because using a phone can be distracting to two notifications and other apps.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because using a phone can be distracting due to notifications and other apps.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'due to' correctly expresses the cause of distraction.

× On paper, I found it easier to focus and organize my source clearly.

✓ On paper, I find it easier to focus and organize my thoughts clearly.

'Source' is incorrect in this context; 'thoughts' is the appropriate noun. Also, 'found' should be 'find' to maintain present tense consistency.