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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, why every time so I go to the shop shopping, I will make her list.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes. But not frequently, only one. I have a lot of work. I will make a list. Most of the time they are actually work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

They think making this when they have they have a huge work to do. Is very UN convenience and timeless.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make her lease on my phone 'cause. Or pick up a form, I will remember what job I want to do and.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法和表达存在错误,建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并使用正确的代词和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to help me remember what to buy.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不清晰,建议使用完整句子,明确说明制作清单的频率和效果,并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work when I have many tasks. It helps me organize my work better.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 表达不准确且有语法错误,建议用更清晰的句子说明原因,并使用合适的词汇。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming when they have a lot of work.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,建议完整表达偏好并说明原因,避免使用错误的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily edit them anytime.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, why every time so I go to the shop shopping, I will make her list.

Yes, every time I go shopping, I will make my list.

句中使用了错误的代词“her”,应使用“my”表示“我的”。此外,句子结构混乱,需调整顺序使其通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes. But not frequently, only one. I have a lot of work. I will make a list. Most of the time they are actually work.

Yes, but not frequently, only once. I have a lot of work. I will make a list. Most of the time, it is actually work.

“only one”应改为“only once”表示次数;“they are actually work”中“they”指代不明,应改为“it”指代“work”,因为work是不可数名词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× They think making this when they have they have a huge work to do. Is very UN convenience and timeless.

They think making lists when they have a huge amount of work to do is very inconvenient and time-consuming.

“a huge work”应改为“a huge amount of work”表示大量工作;“UN convenience”应为“inconvenient”;“timeless”用错,应为“time-consuming”表示耗时。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to make her lease on my phone 'cause. Or pick up a form, I will remember what job I want to do and.

I prefer to make my list on my phone because when I pick up a form, I will remember what job I want to do.

“her lease”应为“my list”,代词错误;句子不完整,需补充完整表达;“'cause”应写为“because”更正式。

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