Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like making a list before I go to shop becauses it can help me remember what I need and what I should buy. Also it can. It can stops me from. Buying something unimportant.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to make a list for my work. Because it can help me organize my. Task is. In our order and. Remember Me on for everything. It can be ordered. With.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people may think making list this is a strict way and they don't like this. This way also other people may think. They can remember everything so they don't need to eat.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me to edit or delete some. Plans anytime and anywhere. If I write something down, I don't have this function and I might just lose it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多,句子不连贯,影响表达的自然和有效性。建议加强句子结构练习,避免重复和断句错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续,语法和表达不完整,缺乏连贯性。建议练习完整句子表达,并使用连接词使内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks in order and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,句子结构混乱,部分内容不符合逻辑。建议理清思路,使用更准确的词汇和句型表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it too strict, or they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但句子断裂影响流畅性。建议练习连贯表达,避免句子过短或断开。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to edit or delete plans anytime and anywhere, unlike paper lists which I might lose.
× Yes, I like making a list before I go to shop becauses it can help me remember what I need and what I should buy.
✓ Yes, I like making a list before I go shopping because it can help me remember what I need and what I should buy.
动词go后面接动名词形式表示去做某事,应该用go shopping而不是go to shop。
× Also it can. It can stops me from. Buying something unimportant.
✓ Also, it can stop me from buying something unimportant.
情态动词can后面接动词原形,不能用stops。动词stop后接动名词形式buying。
× Yes, I like to make a list for my work. Because it can help me organize my. Task is. In our order and. Remember Me on for everything. It can be ordered. With.
✓ Yes, I like to make a list for my work because it can help me organize my tasks in order and remind me of everything. It can be ordered.
句子断断续续,缺少连贯性和完整结构,需要合并并调整词序使句子通顺。
× I think some people may think making list this is a strict way and they don't like this.
✓ I think some people may think making lists is a strict way and they don't like this.
名词list应使用复数形式lists,因为指的是一般的多次制作清单的行为。
× This way also other people may think. They can remember everything so they don't need to eat.
✓ Also, other people may think they can remember everything so they don't need to make a list.
句子结构不完整且意思不清,缺少谓语和宾语,需补充完整表达。
× Also it can. It can stops me from. Buying something unimportant.
✓ Also, it can stop me from buying something unimportant.
重复使用it can且动词形式错误,情态动词can后应接动词原形stop。
× I like to make a list for my work.
✓ I like to make a list of my work.
make a list后通常接of表示列出某物,而不是for。
× Remember Me on for everything.
✓ Remind me of everything.
动词remember后不接me on,正确表达是remind me of。
× It can be ordered. With.
✓ It can be ordered.
句子末尾多余的with应删除,保持句子完整。
× They can remember everything so they don't need to eat.
✓ They can remember everything so they don't need to make a list.
句中eat用错,应该是make a list,表达不需要列清单。