List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural flow and clarity. Try to use simpler and more direct sentences, avoid redundancy, and correct grammar mistakes. For example, say 'No, I don't make a list when I shop. I usually buy things spontaneously based on what I feel I need.'

Ví dụ: No, I don't make a list when I shop. I usually buy things spontaneously based on what I feel I need at the moment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, 'Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. Although I don't always follow it strictly, it helps me stay organized, especially during exam season.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. Although I don't always follow it strictly, it helps me stay organized, especially during exam season.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper sentence structure. For example, 'Some people, including me, don't like making lists because we are not very organized and prefer to do things spontaneously.'

Ví dụ: Some people, including me, don't like making lists because we are not very organized and prefer to do things spontaneously.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and clearer sentences. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it has reminders that notify me when I need to complete tasks. Although paper lists are traditional, I find my phone more convenient.'

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it has reminders that notify me when I need to complete tasks. Although paper lists are traditional, I find my phone more convenient.

× No, I did not make a list.

✓ No, I do not make a list.

The question is in present tense 'Do you make a list?', so the answer should also be in present tense. Using past tense 'did not make' is inconsistent here.

× When I shop and then I go shopping, I just buy stuff that my head and heart inside towards.

✓ When I shop, I just buy stuff that my head and heart guide me towards.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'When I shop and then I go shopping' is redundant. Also, 'stuff that my head and heart inside towards' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I make A to do list for my work, though I have not been the person who followed oftenly but yes it does work.

✓ I make a to-do list for my work, though I have not been the person who follows it often, but yes, it does work.

'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. 'Followed oftenly' is incorrect; 'oftenly' is not a word, and past tense 'followed' does not fit here. Present tense 'follows' and adverb 'often' are correct.

× When I exams around within it's exam season it definitely does well then, but mostly no.

✓ When exams are around during exam season, it definitely works well then, but mostly no.

'When I exams around within it's exam season' is incorrect. 'Exams' is a noun, so 'I exams' is wrong. 'Within it's exam season' should be 'during exam season'. Also, 'does well' is better as 'works well' in this context.

× Though it's completely up to them, but in some people I would include myself as well.

✓ Though it's completely up to them, I would include myself among those people as well.

Using both 'Though' and 'but' together is redundant. Also, 'in some people' is incorrect; 'among those people' is appropriate.

× I did not like make me less because I'm generally not an organized person and I like to do things as they come towards me.

✓ I do not like to make myself less because I'm generally not an organized person and I like to do things as they come to me.

The sentence mixes past tense 'did not like' with present context. Also, 'make me less' should be 'make myself less' to use the reflexive pronoun correctly. 'Come towards me' is better as 'come to me'.

× I prefer to make a list of my phone as I have reminders set for them and whenever I need to complete the task my phones is things me and I get reminded for it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as I have reminders set for them, and whenever I need to complete a task, my phone reminds me and I get notified.

'Make a list of my phone' should be 'make a list on my phone'. 'My phones is things me' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone reminds me'. Also, 'I get reminded for it' is better as 'I get notified' or 'I get reminded' without 'for it'.

× Though paper is more of a traditional way to make list but I would still prefer a phone over paper any day.

✓ Though paper is a more traditional way to make a list, I would still prefer a phone over paper any day.

Using both 'Though' and 'but' together is redundant. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. The sentence is corrected for proper conjunction use and article usage.