Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
When I'm shopping I usually make it list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, and before I start work I usually make a list. Any usually. Doesn't work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe the thing making this? Is too difficult. And doesn't work.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to make her list on paper, Ann. All my phone. Be 'cause. It's. Convenience. And. Useful.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,应该说 "I usually make a list"。此外,回答较短,缺少细节和连贯性。建议在回答时使用完整句子,并添加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如 "Any usually" 和 "Doesn't work" 不清楚。建议使用完整且连贯的句子,明确表达观点,并解释原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel that it doesn't help them stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续,语法和表达错误严重,难以理解。建议用完整句子表达偏好,并说明原因,使用连贯的语言。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more convenient for me to write things down quickly and I find it easier to remember tasks that way.
× When I'm shopping I usually make it list.
✓ When I'm shopping I usually make a list.
这里的it是错误的代词用法,应该用不定冠词a来表示泛指的列表。
× Yes, and before I start work I usually make a list. Any usually. Doesn't work.
✓ Yes, and before I start work I usually make a list. But usually, it doesn't work.
Any通常不用于此处,且缺少主语,应该用it来指代前面的list,且需要连接词but表示转折。
× Maybe the thing making this? Is too difficult. And doesn't work.
✓ Maybe making this is too difficult, and it doesn't work.
原句结构混乱,疑问句和陈述句混合,缺少主语和谓语,需调整为完整的陈述句。
× Yes, I prefer to make her list on paper, Ann. All my phone. Be 'cause. It's. Convenience. And. Useful.
✓ Yes, I prefer to make my list on paper, not on my phone, because it's convenient and useful.
her list错误,应该是my list;Ann可能是误听或误写,应去除;句子断裂且用词不当,需连贯表达原因。