Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list on my shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list of all my work because I think it's a good way to avoid forgetting things.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because many people think Maker is there is a good way to avoid things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make her this down on paper. Because I think is good for my eyes.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,应该说 "make a list for my shopping" 或者更自然地说 "make a shopping list"。同时,回答较短,缺少细节。建议在回答时使用正确的介词,并适当扩展内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list before I go to the store to make sure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,表达了原因,但可以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并增加具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list of all my tasks because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且有语法错误,表达不明确。建议先明确观点,再用简单句子表达原因,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议使用完整句子并解释原因,避免断句。
Ví dụ: I prefer to write my lists on paper because it is easier on my eyes than looking at a phone screen for a long time.
× Yes, I often make a list on my shopping.
✓ Yes, I often make a list for my shopping.
介词“on”用在这里不正确,应该用“for”表示“为……做清单”。建议记住常用搭配,如“make a list for something”。
× I prefer to make her this down on paper.
✓ I prefer to write this down on paper.
句中“make her this down”结构不正确,正确表达是“write this down”,表示“把……写下来”。建议学习固定短语“write down”。
× Because I think is good for my eyes.
✓ Because I think it is good for my eyes.
句子缺少主语“it”,导致结构不完整。建议注意完整句子需要主语和谓语。
× Because many people think Maker is there is a good way to avoid things.
✓ Because many people think making lists is a good way to avoid forgetting things.
句子结构混乱,词语使用错误。应使用动名词“making lists”作主语,且“there is”多余。建议理清句子主谓宾结构,避免多余词语。