List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'friend a ride'. Start with a direct response, then explain how using your iPhone helps you. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a grocery list on my iPhone notes. It helps me remember all the items so I don't forget anything. Moreover, using my phone makes shopping easier and more organized than before.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about how the diary helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I keep a daily schedule diary with me at work and college. It includes important tasks and timings, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Provide a direct answer explaining why some people dislike making lists, and support it with reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and restrictive. Additionally, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more fluent and avoid repetition. Start with a clear preference, then explain why you prefer your phone over paper, using linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easier to add or check items anytime, unlike paper lists which can be lost or feel wasteful.

× Yes, I will friend a ride the grocery list on my iPhone notes.

✓ Yes, I will find a ride the grocery list on my iPhone notes.

The word 'friend' is incorrect here; it should be 'find' which is the correct verb form. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× It had iPhone and it helps me to remember all the things without forgetting and.

✓ It is on my iPhone and it helps me remember all the things without forgetting.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. 'It had iPhone' is incorrect; it should be 'It is on my iPhone'. Also, 'helps me to remember' is better as 'helps me remember'. The phrase 'without forgetting and' is incomplete and should be removed.

× It makes my works easy easier than before because I don't skip any of the items that my mom.

✓ It makes my work easier than before because I don't skip any of the items my mom asks for.

The word 'works' should be singular 'work'. 'Easy easier' is redundant; only 'easier' is needed. The sentence is incomplete at the end; adding 'asks for' clarifies the meaning.

× I usually have a daily routine schedule diary with me. I carried along along with me to the office and the college.

✓ I usually have a daily routine schedule diary with me. I carry it along with me to the office and the college.

The verb 'carried' is past tense but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'carry' is correct. Also, 'along along' is a repetition error.

× It contains variety contains of the daily schedule and the timings the uh that are needed that are important.

✓ It contains a variety of the daily schedule and the timings that are needed and important.

The phrase 'variety contains of' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a variety of'. Also, 'the uh that are needed that are important' is awkward; 'that are needed and important' is better.

× Many of the people. Really use the notepad or other, uh, I other sources to make the list.

✓ Many people really use the notepad or other sources to make the list.

'Many of the people.' is a fragment and unnecessary 'of the' is incorrect here. 'Many people' is the correct quantifier usage.

× While other few people don't encourage these things, they feel uh, somehow tide some in making a list and noting of the.

✓ While a few other people don't encourage these things, they feel somehow tired in making a list and noting things down.

'Other few people' is incorrect; it should be 'a few other people'. 'Tide some' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'tired'. 'Noting of the' is incomplete; 'noting things down' is correct.

× Most of the times I carry my mobile phone to everywhere so it makes it so it makes my work easier to note all the list in my notepad rather than writing it on the paper.

✓ Most of the time I carry my mobile phone everywhere, so it makes my work easier to note all the list in my notepad rather than writing it on paper.

'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time'. 'Carry my mobile phone to everywhere' is incorrect; 'carry my mobile phone everywhere' is correct. 'Writing it on the paper' should be 'writing it on paper'.

× Writing down on the paper and ticking it. Also I also feels useless of the paper.

✓ Writing down on paper and ticking it. Also, I feel using paper is useless.

The sentence 'Writing down on the paper and ticking it.' is a fragment and needs to be connected or rephrased. 'I also feels' is incorrect; 'I feel' is correct. 'Useless of the paper' is incorrect; 'using paper is useless' is better.