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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

I don't make shopping list because I tend to buy only of you items each time so I can remember them easily.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make To Do List for myself and I think it can help me stay organized and focused so I can manage my time efficiently.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think some individuals perceive list making as time consuming and as they feel confident in their ability to deal with the remembering things.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the tactile feelings of write things down and I always write things down and when I had done yet across the top for the. This.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议注意句子结构,避免拼写错误,并且使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time, so I can remember them easily.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但可以通过使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时注意冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for myself because it helps me stay organized and focused, so I can manage my time efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构不够清晰,表达有些冗长且不自然,建议简化句子并使用合适的连接词。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and feel confident in their memory.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,建议简化表达,注意时态和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down, and I like to cross out tasks when I have completed them.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I don't make shopping list because I tend to buy only of you items each time so I can remember them easily.

I don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time so I can remember them easily.

这里缺少冠词“a”,shopping list是可数名词,单数形式前需要加冠词;另外,you items应为few items,表示少量。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I don't make shopping list because I tend to buy only of you items each time so I can remember them easily.

I don't make a shopping list because I tend to buy only a few items each time so I can remember them easily.

“only of you items”中“of you”用法错误,应为“a few”表示少量。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I always make To Do List for myself and I think it can help me stay organized and focused so I can manage my time efficiently.

Yes, I always make a To Do List for myself and I think it can help me stay organized and focused so I can manage my time efficiently.

“To Do List”是可数名词,单数形式前需要加冠词“a”。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× I think some individuals perceive list making as time consuming and as they feel confident in their ability to deal with the remembering things.

I think some individuals perceive list making as time consuming because they feel confident in their ability to remember things.

句中“and as”连接不当,应使用“because”表示原因;“deal with the remembering things”表达不自然,应改为“remember things”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the tactile feelings of write things down and I always write things down and when I had done yet across the top for the. This.

I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down, and I always write things down and when I have done, I put a tick across the top for this.

“feelings of write things down”中“of write”应为“of writing”,动名词形式;“when I had done yet across the top for the. This.”句子结构混乱,时态错误,应改为“when I have done, I put a tick across the top for this”。

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