Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Do you make a list when you shop?
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I was going to the supermarket, I always make a list for what I buy. For example, I always rise of your bank some foods, vegetables or chocolate candies. And when I make a list from my work, I will mores.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, complicated, an waste of times and most of them might have a very strong memories to memorize what they have to buy ice. But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some list to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
From point of views I prefer to make a lease on my phones because it's more convenience and I can take it every moment and it is also I need to use forms always so it's very convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议直接回答问题,并且简洁明了地说明你是否会列购物清单。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,内容也不够具体。建议使用简单明了的句子,直接回答问题,并举具体例子说明列清单的效果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks, which helps me stay organized and complete everything on time. For shopping, I list items like vegetables and snacks to avoid forgetting anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe they have a good memory. However, I prefer making lists since it helps me remember things better.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,建议使用正确的句型和词汇,清晰表达偏好和原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can access it anytime, which helps me stay organized.
× Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I was going to the supermarket, I always make a list for what I buy.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I go to the supermarket, I always make a list of what I buy.
这里的时间是一般现在时,表示习惯动作,所以应该用一般现在时go而不是过去进行时was going。
× For example, I always rise of your bank some foods, vegetables or chocolate candies.
✓ For example, I always buy some food, vegetables, or chocolate candies.
句中使用了错误的词汇和介词,'rise of your bank'没有意义,应该用buy表示购买,foods应为food,且不需要复数形式。
× And when I make a list from my work, I will mores.
✓ And when I make a list for my work, I will buy more.
句子结构混乱,'make a list from my work'应为'make a list for my work','mores'不是正确单词,应为'buy more'。
× Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, complicated, an waste of times and most of them might have a very strong memories to memorize what they have to buy ice.
✓ Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, a waste of time, and most of them might have a very strong memory to memorize what they have to buy.
'an waste of times'错误,应该是'a waste of time','memories'应为不可数名词'memory','buy ice'可能是口误,去掉ice更通顺。
× But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some list to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
✓ But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some lists to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
'some list'应为复数形式'some lists',因为some后面接可数名词复数。
× From point of views I prefer to make a lease on my phones because it's more convenience and I can take it every moment and it is also I need to use forms always so it's very convenient.
✓ From my point of view, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient, and I can take it everywhere. Also, I always need to use forms, so it's very convenient.
'From point of views'应为'From my point of view','make a lease'应为'make a list','on my phones'应为'on my phone','more convenience'应为'more convenient',句子结构混乱,需调整使其通顺。