Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答を明確で自然な英文にし、支援文は1～2文にまとめて論理的に繋げてください。発音のための躊躇語（uh, I, Iなど）を減らし、なぜ好きかの具体的な理由（感情や状況）を述べると効果的です。例えば“it gives me energy”や“it helps me relax”など具体語を使ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Singing gives me energy and helps me feel more confident, especially when I perform with friends.

Gợi ý: 文法と語順を正しくし、理由は具体的に述べてください。否定の答えの後に“because”でつなぐ際は完全な文を作り、“I don't like singing in front of children”のように対象や状況を明確に。可能なら代替活動（練習したいかどうか）も述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't. I haven't taken formal lessons because I feel uncomfortable singing in front of children, but I would like to learn someday.

Gợi ý: 質問の意味を正確に理解して直接答えてください（誰に歌いたいか）。所有表現や誕生日情報は追加説明として使えますが、主文は“for my family”や“for my friends”のように簡潔に。誕生日の理由を付けるなら接続語でつなげてください。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family and close friends because I usually celebrate my birthday with them on June 18.

Gợi ý: 理由を自然で文法的に正しい形で述べてください。’singling’の誤りを直し、具体例は簡潔に示すこと（'for example, when I sing I feel happy'）。リンク語（because, for example, so）を効果的に使い、冗長を避けてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because singing is very relaxing; for example, when I sing I feel happier and less stressed.

Gợi ý: 答えは直接的にし、理由は論理的に関連する内容にしてください。“I go to school to train”は不明瞭なので、聞いてリラックスすることや学ぶために聴くなど具体的に説明してください。接続詞で一文をまとめると綺麗です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because listening to others relaxes me and it helps me learn new techniques when I attend training at school.

Gợi ý: 過去形と時制を正しく使い、経験の有無を明確に述べてください。もし過去に受けたなら時期と感想を一文でつなげてください。躊躇語を減らし、'I hope'は未来の意図なので混同しないでください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I took a singing class in junior high school and I enjoyed it because the teacher was very encouraging.

× Why yes, I do, Because I, I think that, uh, power.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think it gives me energy.

The original sentence has disfluent conjunctions and fragments. 'Because' should connect a clause explaining why; 'I think that, uh, power' is ungrammatical. Combine into a clear clause: 'because I think it gives me energy.' Remove filler words and repeated pronouns. Use a complete subordinate clause after 'because'.

× No, I haven't because I don't like to singing children.

✓ No, I haven't because I don't like singing.

'Like to singing' is incorrect combination: after 'like' use the gerund 'singing' or the infinitive 'to sing', not both. Also 'children' is extraneous and unclear; remove it unless intended meaning is different. Use 'I don't like singing.'

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This question sentence is correct as written and does not require grammatical correction. No change needed.

× It's mine because my birthday is June 18.

✓ It's mine because my birthday is on June 18.

When giving dates in English, use the preposition 'on' before a specific day: 'on June 18.' 'It's mine' is acceptable if context refers to a gift; keep as is.

× Yes, I do, because singling is very relaxing and for example I do is very happy.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing is very relaxing and, for example, it makes me very happy.

Spelling error 'singling' should be 'singing.' 'For example' must be set off by commas and the clause 'I do is very happy' is ungrammatical; use 'it makes me very happy' to express cause and effect. Ensure subject 'it' refers to 'singing.'

× Yes I do because I relax and I go to school to train.

✓ Yes, I do, because it relaxes me and I attend school to train.

The student used 'I relax' which is grammatically possible but more natural to say 'it relaxes me' when referring to singing. Also use 'attend school' instead of 'go to school' to indicate formal classes, and keep verbs consistent. Add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I hope when junior high school class umm very nice.

✓ Yes, I did when I was in junior high school; the classes were very nice.

The original mixes tenses and fragments. To refer to past experience, use past tense: 'did' and 'was in junior high school.' 'Hope' is incorrect here. Clarify with a complete sentence: 'the classes were very nice.'