Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "it's not belong to me". Также ответ слишком длинный и немного повторяется. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать излишней детализации и говорить более уверенно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. However, I usually sing only when I am alone because I feel shy about my voice around others.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений, например, "I used to play it umbrella". Также предложение слишком длинное и неструктурированное. Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения и четко отвечать на вопрос, избегая лишних деталей.

Ví dụ: Yes, I attended music school where I learned some singing techniques. I also played in an orchestra, but I feel that singing lessons did not improve my voice much.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки, например, "I'm seeing just for myself" и "perform of performing". Рекомендуется строить предложения более грамотно и избегать повторов, а также использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ví dụ: I sing mainly for myself because I don't plan to become a professional singer. Also, I feel nervous about performing in front of an audience.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и немного неструктурирован. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и более точные выражения, а также избегать повторов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions, whether they are happy or sad. For example, singing can help lift someone's mood or provide comfort.

× I really like singing, but I feel that it's not belong to me.

✓ I really like singing, but I feel that it doesn't belong to me.

The verb 'belong' should be in the present tense with the auxiliary 'does' to form the negative sentence correctly. 'It's not belong' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't belong'.

× So around other people I'm sitting really quiet because I'm really shy about my voice and it doesn't feel right.

✓ So around other people, I sit really quietly because I'm really shy about my voice and it doesn't feel right.

The phrase 'I'm sitting really quiet' is incorrect because 'quiet' is an adjective and should be an adverb 'quietly' to modify the verb 'sit'. Also, 'sit' is more appropriate than 'am sitting' for habitual action. A comma after 'people' improves clarity.

× So I think only on my own when I'm alone.

✓ So I think I only sing on my own when I'm alone.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb for the main idea. Adding 'I only sing' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I used to go to the music school when I learned how to sing and I play in a in a orchestra and I used to play it umbrella, but I don't learn how to sing like doesn't help me at all.

✓ I used to go to music school when I learned how to sing, and I played in an orchestra. I used to play the umbrella, but I didn't learn how to sing; it didn't help me at all.

The verb 'play' should be in past tense 'played' to match the past context. 'In a orchestra' should be 'in an orchestra' due to vowel sound. 'Don't learn' should be 'didn't learn' to maintain past tense. The phrase 'play it umbrella' is unclear; assuming 'play the umbrella' is intended. Also, semicolons and commas improve sentence clarity.

× I'm seeing just for myself because I don't, I'm not gonna be a pop star or singer or singer at all.

✓ I sing just for myself because I don't want to be a pop star or singer at all.

'I'm seeing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'I sing'. The phrase 'I'm not gonna be' is informal; 'I don't want to be' is clearer and grammatically correct. Repetition of 'singer' is removed.

× Like I'm really scared of perform of performing at public and yeah, that's the reason.

✓ I'm really scared of performing in public, and yeah, that's the reason.

The phrase 'scared of perform of performing' is incorrect; 'scared of performing' is correct. Also, 'at public' should be 'in public' as the correct preposition for public places.

× I do think that singing can help people bring happiness because it just the way to express your feelings and thoughts to everyone like be happy or if you're feeling sad you can express it with singing and just the best reason, best example for you.

✓ I do think that singing can help people bring happiness because it's just a way to express your feelings and thoughts to everyone. Whether you're happy or feeling sad, you can express it through singing; it's the best example.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks proper connectors and articles. Adding 'it's just a way' corrects the article usage. Breaking into two sentences improves clarity. 'With singing' is better expressed as 'through singing'. The phrase 'just the best reason, best example for you' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.