Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如"I'm not convenient of my singing abilities"应改为"I'm not confident in my singing abilities"。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并简洁明了地说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities. Singing in front of others makes me feel shy and nervous.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误，如"learned how to see"应为"learned how to sing"，"I don't see my music lessons is interesting"应为"I didn't find my music lessons interesting"。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in senior high school, but I didn't find my music lessons interesting, so I don't like singing.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如"my singing skills isn't good"应为"my singing skills aren't good"，"they will easily become laughing"表达不自然。建议使用更准确的语法和自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I only want to sing for my father because my singing skills aren't good. If I sing for others, like my mother or brother, they might laugh at me.

Gợi ý: 回答中多处拼写错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，语法和表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，表达观点时要条理清楚，使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: I don't think singing always brings happiness to people because bad music can make people feel sad or nervous.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not convenient of my singing abilities.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident about my singing abilities.

这里 'convenient' 用错了，应该用形容词 'confident' 来表达自信。'convenient' 意为方便，不适合描述能力。建议记住常用形容词搭配，如 'confident about' 表示对某事有信心。

× Singing in front of others or strangers easily makes me feel shy and nervous.

✓ Singing in front of others or strangers easily makes me feel shy and nervous.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, but I only learned how to see when I'm in the Senior High School and I don't see my music lessons is interesting so I don't like singing.

✓ Yes, but I only learned how to sing when I was in Senior High School and I don't find my music lessons interesting, so I don't like singing.

1. 'learned' 后面应该接 'how to sing'，原文写成 'see' 是拼写错误。2. 'when I'm' 应用过去时 'when I was'，因为描述过去的经历。3. 'don't see my music lessons is interesting' 结构错误，应该用 'don't find my music lessons interesting'。建议注意动词搭配和时态一致。

× I think I only want to sing for my father because my singing skills isn't good and if I sing to others, even if my mother or my brother, they will easily become laughing.

✓ I think I only want to sing for my father because my singing skills aren't good, and if I sing to others, even my mother or my brother, they will easily start laughing.

1. 'singing skills isn't' 主谓不一致，'skills' 是复数，动词应为 'aren't'。2. 'even if my mother or my brother' 结构不当，改为 'even my mother or my brother' 更合适。3. 'become laughing' 用法错误，正确表达是 'start laughing'。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配。

× I don't think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ I don't think singing can bring happiness to people.

这里 'seeing' 是拼写错误，应该是 'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。建议注意单词拼写，避免影响句意。

× The one reason is that I don't like seeing the others is that bad music will made others people have different emotions such as sad or nervous.

✓ The main reason I don't like singing is that bad music can make other people have different emotions such as sadness or nervousness.

1. 'seeing' 应为 'singing'。2. 'will made' 时态错误，应为 'can make'。3. 'others people' 结构错误，应为 'other people'。4. 'sad or nervous' 应用名词形式 'sadness or nervousness'。建议注意动词时态、名词复数和形容词/名词形式的正确使用。