Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add a specific reason. Also, avoid redundancy like repeating 'I love to sing'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it has been my passion since childhood. I especially enjoy songs by Diljit Dosanjh, who is a famous singer worldwide.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, avoid hesitation and repetition. Provide specific information about your learning experience and achievements.

Ví dụ: Yes, after finishing 10th grade, I learned singing from my school music teacher who encouraged all students to participate. I took part in a singing competition and was rewarded for my performance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and clearer sentence structure. Also, correct the song title and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because she is very special to me. On Mother's Day, I plan to surprise her by singing a beautiful song called 'Meri Maa'. I believe she will feel very happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain why singing brings happiness.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, singing definitely brings happiness because it is a form of emotional expression. Moreover, singing helps people relax and forget their worries.

× Yes, absolutely I love to sing as singing is not my profession but since my childhood I love to sing as I'm a great fan of a renowned personality Diljit Dosanjh which is a famous singer all around the world.

✓ Yes, absolutely I love to sing as singing is not my profession but since my childhood I have loved singing as I'm a great fan of a renowned personality Diljit Dosanjh who is a famous singer all around the world.

The phrase 'since my childhood I love to sing' is incorrect because 'since' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Also, 'which is a famous singer' should be 'who is a famous singer' because 'who' refers to people. The verb form 'have loved singing' correctly expresses the ongoing action from childhood to now.

× Yes, after completion of my 10th standard, there was a music teacher in my school who admired every person to take part in singing as I have also taken part in one competition, that is that is singing competition and I I was rewarded by.

✓ Yes, after completing my 10th standard, there was a music teacher in my school who encouraged every person to take part in singing. I also took part in a singing competition and I was rewarded.

The phrase 'after completion of my 10th standard' should be 'after completing my 10th standard' to use the gerund form correctly. 'Admired every person to take part' is incorrect; 'encouraged every person to take part' is appropriate. 'I have also taken part' should be 'I also took part' to maintain past tense consistency. The sentence 'that is that is singing competition and I I was rewarded by' is incomplete and redundant; it is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, absolutely I love to sing as singing is not my profession but since my childhood I love to sing as I'm a great fan of a renowned personality Diljit Dosanjh which is a famous singer all around the world.

✓ Yes, absolutely I love to sing as singing is not my profession but since my childhood I have loved singing as I'm a great fan of a renowned personality Diljit Dosanjh who is a famous singer all around the world.

The pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for a person; 'who' should be used instead when referring to people. This correction improves the sentence's grammatical accuracy.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

In formal English, 'for whom' is the correct prepositional phrase instead of ending the sentence with a preposition. However, in spoken English, ending with a preposition is common and acceptable.

× I want to sing for my mother as my mother is a great person. One day I think that on Mother's Day I will surprise her by by singing a nice song for her. This song was Merry Ma. She will feel very nice.

✓ I want to sing for my mother as she is a great person. One day, I think that on Mother's Day I will surprise her by singing a nice song for her. The song is 'Meri Maa'. She will feel very happy.

The phrase 'by by singing' has a repeated word; one 'by' should be removed. 'This song was Merry Ma' is incorrect; it should be 'The song is 'Meri Maa'' to indicate the song's name. 'She will feel very nice' is incorrect; 'She will feel very happy' is appropriate because 'nice' is not used to describe feelings.

× According to my perspective, singing will definitely will definitely bring happiness to the people as singing is a emotion. By singing people can people can lose their temperament and.

✓ According to my perspective, singing will definitely bring happiness to people as singing is an emotion. By singing, people can lose their temper.

The phrase 'will definitely will definitely' is repeated; one should be removed. 'A emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'an emotion' because 'emotion' starts with a vowel sound. 'People can people can' is repeated; one should be removed. 'Lose their temperament' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lose their temper' meaning to become less angry or upset.