Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like seeing because I think seeing is very relaxed. I feel relaxed and I want to show my voice to my family.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, because I think seeing is. It's just for funny, it's just for fun. I don't want to let it to be a. Study to learn.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I just want to sing by myself, uh, sing just for fun, not because the others.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think when we sing, I think we. Save some constructive.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有多处发音错误(如'seeing'应为'singing'),影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音准确,同时回答应更自然流畅,避免重复表达“relaxed”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. I especially enjoy singing for my family because it brings us closer.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不完整,且发音错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点,避免语法错误,并使用恰当词汇表达“just for fun”。
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I consider singing just a fun activity, not something I want to formally study.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且有语法错误,表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子,避免口语填充词,表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer to sing by myself for fun, not to perform for others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊,缺乏具体内容和连贯性。建议明确表达观点,使用具体理由支持,并保持句子完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions.
× Yes, I like seeing because I think seeing is very relaxed.
✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing is very relaxing.
这里'seeing'是错误的动名词形式,正确的应该是'singing',因为题目问的是唱歌。'relaxed'是形容词,描述人的状态,应该用现在分词'relaxing'来描述事物的特性。
× I feel relaxed and I want to show my voice to my family.
✓ I feel relaxed and I want to show my voice to my family.
这句话语法正确,无需修改。
× No, because I think seeing is.
✓ No, because I think singing is.
这里'seeing'应为'singing',且句子不完整,应该补充完整表达。
× It's just for funny, it's just for fun.
✓ It's just for fun, it's just for fun.
'funny'是形容词,意思是'有趣的',但这里应使用名词'fun'表示'娱乐'。
× I don't want to let it to be a. Study to learn.
✓ I don't want to make it a study to learn.
句子结构混乱,'let it to be a'不正确,应该用'make it a study to learn'表达不想把唱歌当作学习。
× I just want to sing by myself, uh, sing just for fun, not because the others.
✓ I just want to sing by myself, uh, sing just for fun, not because of others.
'because the others'缺少介词,正确用法是'because of others'。
× Yes, I think when we sing, I think we. Save some constructive.
✓ Yes, I think when we sing, we save some constructive energy.
句子不完整且结构混乱,补充完整表达意思。