Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi kalimatnya terasa agak kaku dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and brightens my day.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat banyak kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai agar jawaban lebih mudah dipahami.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I sing every day just for fun.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, namun ada pengulangan kata dan tata bahasa yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself to relax and enjoy my day, but sometimes I like to sing with my friends when I have time.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan sulit dipahami karena tata bahasa yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk menyampaikan pendapat Anda dengan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan teratur, serta gunakan contoh yang relevan.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness. For example, when I feel stressed about exams, singing helps me relax and feel better.

× I like singing because singing can refresh my mind and make my day enjoy.

✓ I like singing because singing can refresh my mind and make my day enjoyable.

The word 'enjoy' is a verb, but here it needs to be an adjective to describe 'my day'. The correct adjective form is 'enjoyable'. Using 'enjoy' in this context is incorrect.

× No I haven't but I ever saying every day but I not learn deeply like what's how to sing properly how to be an artist.

✓ No, I haven't, but I sing every day. However, I have not learned deeply how to sing properly or how to be an artist.

The sentence uses 'ever saying' incorrectly; 'ever' is not used with present continuous. Also, 'not learn' should be in present perfect 'have not learned' to indicate an action not done up to now. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× No I'm not but I always sing every day just like for my mega day.

✓ No, I'm not, but I always sing every day, just like for my mega day.

The sentence is missing commas for clarity. 'I'm not' is incomplete; it should be connected properly to the context. The phrase 'just like for my mega day' is unclear but kept as is since it may be a specific expression.

× I didn't want to sing for anyone, I just sing for myself and make my make my day more enjoy and more relaxing.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone; I just sing for myself and make my day more enjoyable and relaxing.

The use of 'didn't want' is past tense, but the context is present preference, so 'don't want' is correct. 'Make my day more enjoy' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be 'enjoyable' as an adjective. Also, 'make my make my day' is a repetition error corrected.

× But if I have time for singing together with my friends, maybe I want to sing with my friends together.

✓ But if I have time to sing together with my friends, maybe I would like to sing with them.

'Want to' is less polite or less conditional here; 'would like to' is more appropriate for expressing a possibility. Also, 'for singing' should be 'to sing' as the correct infinitive form after 'have time'. Repetition of 'with my friends' is avoided.

× Absolutely, because I know that position I ever in that position when I sing or in that moment I frustrate because of the test.

✓ Absolutely, because I know that position; I have been in that position when I sing or at that moment I get frustrated because of the test.

'I ever in that position' is incorrect; 'I have been in that position' is correct present perfect tense. 'I frustrate' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I get frustrated' to express the feeling.

× But if I saying it's called bringing happiness and make me more relaxing.

✓ But when I sing, it brings happiness and makes me more relaxed.

'If I saying' is incorrect; it should be 'when I sing' or 'if I sing'. 'It's called bringing happiness' is awkward; better to say 'it brings happiness'. 'Make me more relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me more relaxed' because 'relaxed' is the adjective describing the state of the person.