Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Well, actually I don't like singing very much because I have a bad tune and I think it is very difficult for me to sing a song and I don't think my voice is excellent. I always admire those who can sing very well.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
I have tried to take a bit of lessons but the teachers all said that I don't have a talent of singing. So finally I gave it up and I think I will never sing in the future.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
If I can sing a song beautifully and in tune, I think I would sing for my mom and dad because they are the most too important people in the world. I really want to sing a song to appreciate them.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Definitely people always saying a lot to express their happiness and dreadfulness. When I when it comes to some ceremonies or celebration, there are always a lot of people sing and bring happy.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免重复表达相同意思。可以先直接回答喜欢与否，再简要说明原因。
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy singing because I find it hard to stay in tune, and I'm not confident about my voice. However, I admire people who can sing well.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，使用连接词使句子流畅，同时避免消极表达。
Ví dụ: I once took some singing lessons, but the teachers told me I lacked talent. Therefore, I decided to stop, although I still enjoy listening to music.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时注意语法准确，避免多余词汇，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: If I could sing well, I would sing for my parents because they mean the world to me. I want to show my appreciation through a song.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰准确，避免语法错误和重复，使用具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: Definitely, singing helps people express their emotions. For example, during celebrations, many people sing together, which creates a joyful atmosphere.
Ngữ pháp
× I have a bad tune and I think it is very difficult for me to sing a song
✓ I have bad tunes and I think it is very difficult for me to sing a song
这里的“a bad tune”应为复数形式“bad tunes”，因为“tune”在这里指的是音调的能力，通常用复数表示多次音调不准。
× I have tried to take a bit of lessons but the teachers all said that I don't have a talent of singing.
✓ I have tried to take a few lessons but the teachers all said that I don't have a talent for singing.
“a bit of lessons”不合适，应改为“a few lessons”表示少量课程；“talent of singing”应为“talent for singing”，介词用法错误。
× I think I will never sing in the future.
✓ I think I will never sing in the future.
此句语法正确，无需修改。
× they are the most too important people in the world.
✓ they are the two most important people in the world.
“most too important”词序错误，应为“two most important”，表示“最重要的两个”。
× Definitely people always saying a lot to express their happiness and dreadfulness.
✓ Definitely people are always saying a lot to express their happiness and dreadfulness.
“people always saying”缺少助动词，应为“people are always saying”，表示现在进行时。
× there are always a lot of people sing and bring happy.
✓ there are always a lot of people singing and bringing happiness.
“people sing and bring happy”结构错误，应使用动名词形式“singing”和“bringing”，且“happy”应为名词“happiness”。
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)