Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I don't sing well' and 'nobody appreciate me', you can say: 'Although I'm not a professional singer and my vocal skills are limited, I enjoy singing when I feel happy and relaxed because it is my way of expressing love.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings. Although I'm not a professional and my voice isn't perfect, I often sing when I'm happy or relaxed, and I enjoy it as a fun activity.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same points. Also, try to provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't consider myself a professional. I usually sing just for fun when I'm happy or relaxed, and I don't mind if others don't appreciate it.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammatical mistakes. For example, instead of repeating 'I just want' and 'I haven't learned', you can say: 'I prefer to sing only for myself when I feel happy or relaxed, and I have never taken professional singing classes or performed on stage.'

Ví dụ: I usually sing only for myself to feel happier and more relaxed. I haven't taken any professional singing classes, and I don't perform in front of others.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, you can say: 'I believe that not all songs bring happiness. While sad songs may evoke feelings of sadness, upbeat and enthusiastic songs can motivate people and improve their mood.'

Ví dụ: I think singing can bring happiness, but it depends on the type of song. Sad songs might make people feel down, but lively and cheerful songs can boost their mood and make them feel happy.

× I'm not a professional singer, so I don't sing well, but nobody appreciate me and I take that as a fun.

✓ I'm not a professional singer, so I don't sing well, but nobody appreciates me and I take that as fun.

The verb 'appreciate' should be in third person singular form 'appreciates' to agree with the singular subject 'nobody'. Also, 'as a fun' is incorrect; 'fun' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article 'a'.

× I don't bother that and.

✓ I don't bother about that.

The phrase 'I don't bother that and' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I don't bother about that' to indicate not being concerned. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past tense forms, but 'learned' is more common in American English, which fits the context better. However, 'learnt' is acceptable in British English. No strict error here, but 'learned' is preferred.

× And nobody appreciates me that much.

✓ And nobody appreciates me that much.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I don't take that on my head.

✓ I don't take that to heart.

The phrase 'take that on my head' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'take that to heart', meaning to be upset or affected by something.

× I just want. I just sing for myself whenever I am happy or relaxed to make myself more happier and delighted.

✓ I just want to sing for myself whenever I am happy or relaxed to make myself happier and delighted.

The sentence 'I just want.' is incomplete and should be connected to the next sentence. Also, 'more happier' is incorrect because 'happier' is already a comparative form; 'more' is redundant.

× So I don't perform it on stage for someone and I don't I haven't learned, I haven't taken professional classes on.

✓ So I don't perform on stage for anyone, and I haven't learned or taken professional classes.

The phrase 'perform it on stage for someone' is awkward; 'perform on stage for anyone' is better. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Sad songs always give you a sense of depression and sadness, but enthusiastic songs give you motivation and make you feel happy and make your mood good.

✓ Sad songs always give you a sense of depression and sadness, but enthusiastic songs give you motivation, make you feel happy, and improve your mood.

The phrase 'make your mood good' is awkward; 'improve your mood' is more natural. Also, adding commas improves readability.