Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax and feel confident. I often sing when I have free time or while studying, and it also helps me improve my singing skills."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax and feel confident. I often sing when I have free time or while studying, and it also helps me improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using correct verb tenses and clearer sentences. Also, explain your learning method more specifically. For example, "I have learned to sing by listening to my favorite songs repeatedly. Sometimes, I find it difficult to sing some songs perfectly, but I keep practicing."

Ví dụ: I have learned to sing by listening to my favorite songs repeatedly. Sometimes, I find it difficult to sing some songs perfectly, but I keep practicing.

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your ideas more clearly and use correct expressions. For example, "I want to sing with my dad, like a couple singing together when we go out or have dinner. Singing together makes me feel confident and relaxed."

Ví dụ: I want to sing with my dad, like a couple singing together when we go out or have dinner. Singing together makes me feel confident and relaxed.

Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using clearer sentences and linking words. For example, "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes us feel good. Also, people who listen to singing feel happy. For example, when we hear people singing outside, it makes us feel joyful."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes us feel good. Also, people who listen to singing feel happy. For example, when we hear people singing outside, it makes us feel joyful.

× I also sing the song when I have free when I study or more, because when I singing I feel no stress and feels confident and sometimes I can improve my singing.

✓ I also sing songs when I have free time, when I study or more, because when I sing I feel no stress and feel confident and sometimes I can improve my singing.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'. It should be the base form 'sing' to match the present tense structure. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the subject 'I'. Additionally, 'have free' is incomplete; it should be 'have free time'.

× For me, I learning singing by listen to the music again and again and listen to my favorite song and sometime I Can't Sing the song that it is my favorite.

✓ For me, I learn singing by listening to music again and again and listening to my favorite songs, and sometimes I can't sing the songs that are my favorite.

The verb 'learning' should be 'learn' to match the present simple tense. 'Listen' should be 'listening' to correctly follow the verb 'by'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Can't Sing' should be lowercase 'can't sing'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Umm for me, I want to sing with my dad like Singapore a couple like when we have three or go to eat dinner that and we can sing the song together.

✓ Umm, for me, I want to sing with my dad like a couple in Singapore, like when we have free time or go to eat dinner, and we can sing songs together.

The phrase 'like Singapore a couple' is unclear and likely missing prepositions and articles. 'Have three' is unclear; likely meant 'have free time'. 'Sing the song' should be 'sing songs' for general meaning. Prepositions and articles are corrected for clarity.

× It made me feel confident and feel relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel confident and relaxed.

The verb tense should be present simple 'makes' to match the ongoing feeling. Also, 'feel' is repeated unnecessarily; 'feel confident and relaxed' is sufficient.

× Yes, for me I think so because when we sing the song we feel good and for the people listen to us that the singings, the people feel happy or that feels good.

✓ Yes, for me, I think so because when we sing songs, we feel good, and for the people who listen to us singing, they feel happy or feel good.

The sentence is confusing and has structural issues. 'The people listen to us that the singings' is incorrect; it should be 'people who listen to us singing'. Also, 'that feels good' should be 'feel good' to agree with 'people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Like us. For example, when we go outside and then we hear the people sing, we feel like so good.

✓ Like us. For example, when we go outside and hear people sing, we feel very good.

'We hear the people sing' is better as 'hear people sing' for naturalness. 'Feel like so good' is incorrect; it should be 'feel very good'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.