Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞使句子更流暢，例如使用"because"或"so"來連接原因和結果。此外，注意動詞時態和用詞的正確性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I have a good voice, which I inherited from my family. When I was a child, my family often sang together at home and during gatherings, so I was influenced by them.

Gợi ý: 你的回答結構不錯，但有些語法錯誤和用詞不當。建議注意冠詞使用（如"an art teacher"），動詞時態一致性，以及避免重複詞彙。可以用連接詞如"especially"來強調細節。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. In my primary school, we had an art teacher who specialized in singing, and she taught me several techniques, especially how to use proper breathing.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表達清楚且有情感，但句子稍長且可更簡潔。建議使用連接詞如"because"和"so"來使句子更流暢，並注意句子結構的平衡。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my God, Jesus Christ, because He has given me this great voice. Therefore, I use my voice to worship Him and let His glory be known to many people.

Gợi ý: 你的回答有語法錯誤和重複詞彙，且句子不夠流暢。建議簡化句子結構，避免重複，並使用連接詞如"when"和"so"來連接原因和結果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. When I feel stressed or depressed, I sing to release my stress, and it makes me feel better than before.

× I do like singing a lot because I have great voice and I think I get this talent from my family.

✓ I do like singing a lot because I have a great voice and I think I get this talent from my family.

The noun 'voice' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect in English.

× When I was a kid, my family always seeing, you know, house or even in big event in family gathering and in the karaoke place.

✓ When I was a kid, my family was always singing, you know, at home or even at big events like family gatherings and in karaoke places.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'singing'. Also, prepositions 'at' are needed before locations, and plural forms 'events' and 'gatherings' are appropriate. The verb tense 'was always singing' fits the past habitual action.

× When I was a kid, my family always seeing, you know, house or even in big event in family gathering and in the karaoke place.

✓ When I was a kid, my family was always singing, you know, at home or even at big events like family gatherings and in karaoke places.

The nouns 'house', 'event', 'family gathering', and 'karaoke place' need to be plural or properly expressed. 'House' should be 'home', 'event' should be plural 'events', 'family gathering' pluralized to 'family gatherings', and 'karaoke place' pluralized to 'karaoke places' to match the context.

× So I get influenced by them.

✓ So I got influenced by them.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the past tense 'got influenced' is appropriate instead of the present tense 'get influenced'.

× In my primary school, we have a art teacher who specialize in singing and she taught me several techniques in singing, especially using the proper breathing for singing.

✓ In my primary school, we had an art teacher who specialized in singing and she taught me several techniques in singing, especially using proper breathing for singing.

'A art teacher' is incorrect; 'an art teacher' is correct because 'art' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'specialize' should be past tense 'specialized' to match 'taught'. 'We have' should be past tense 'we had' to match the past context. 'The proper breathing' can be 'proper breathing' without 'the'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who would you like to sing for?

The question is better expressed with the modal verb 'would like' to indicate polite desire or preference rather than 'do you want'.

× I would like to sing for my God Jesus Christ because He gives me this great voice, so I will use my voice to worship and sing praises to Him and let His glory and greatness be known and heard by so many people.

✓ I would like to sing for my God Jesus Christ because He has given me this great voice, so I will use my voice to worship and sing praises to Him and let His glory and greatness be known and heard by many people.

'He gives me' should be present perfect 'He has given me' to express a past action with present relevance. 'So many people' can be simplified to 'many people' for naturalness.

× I do think yes, seeming can bring happiness.

✓ I do think yes, singing can bring happiness.

The word 'seeming' is a typo or incorrect word; the correct word is 'singing'.

× Whenever I feel stressed out or whenever whenever I feel depressed, I would like to see to release my stress and somehow to singing I can feel a bit better and even more better than before.

✓ Whenever I feel stressed out or depressed, I like to sing to release my stress, and somehow singing makes me feel a bit better, even better than before.

The sentence has redundancy ('whenever whenever'), incorrect verb usage ('see to release' should be 'sing to release'), and awkward phrasing ('somehow to singing'). The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.