Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and well-structured with relevant supporting details. To improve, try to avoid minor redundancy such as "hard working day" which could be more naturally expressed as "a hard day at work." Also, consider varying your vocabulary slightly to enhance fluency.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I enjoy singing because it brings people together and helps me relax after a long day at work. For instance, my friend and I often go to karaoke every week, which is a wonderful way to unwind and strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: Your response is clear and relevant, but the sentence "and which helped me enjoy singing in class" is slightly awkward. Try to connect ideas more smoothly using linking words and correct grammar to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons with a professional teacher. However, in primary school, my music teacher taught us some basic singing techniques, which helped me enjoy singing during class.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your feelings well, but there are some grammatical errors such as "I could love to sing" which should be "I would love to sing." Also, try to use linking words to improve flow and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: If I could choose, I would love to sing for everyone I care about, especially my parents, because singing allows me to express my feelings and show appreciation for their support. Sharing my emotions through music feels very special.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains an incomplete sentence: "because it helps them to." To improve, ensure all sentences are complete and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to add more specific examples or reasons to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed. For example, when I have a stressful exam, I often listen to music or sing to motivate myself and reduce anxiety.

× Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons with a professional teacher. However, in primary school, my music teacher taught us some basic singing technique and which helped me enjoy singing in class.

✓ Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons with a professional teacher. However, in primary school, my music teacher taught us some basic singing techniques which helped me enjoy singing in class.

The word 'technique' should be plural 'techniques' because it refers to multiple methods or skills taught. Also, the word 'and' before 'which' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'which' should directly connect to the previous clause without 'and'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× If I could choose, I could love to sing for everyone I care about, but especially for my parents because singing allows me to express my feelings and show them how much I appreciate their support.

✓ If I could choose, I would love to sing for everyone I care about, but especially for my parents because singing allows me to express my feelings and show them how much I appreciate their support.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrectly used with 'love' here. The correct modal verb to express a hypothetical desire is 'would'. 'Would love to' is the proper phrase to express willingness or desire in a hypothetical situation.

× Absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness to people because it helps them to. It helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

✓ Absolutely. I believe singing brings happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

The phrase 'because it helps them to.' is incomplete and creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'to' and combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.