Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but try to use correct phrases and grammar. For example, instead of 'makes my mood phrase', say 'improves my mood'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences clear and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it improves my mood. Since I was a little kid, I have enjoyed listening to music, mainly Bollywood and Nepali songs. Although I am Nepali, I especially like Bollywood music because its lyrics fascinate me.

Gợi ý: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Instead of 'a bit small', say 'when I was young'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing when I was young, and I used to sing songs as a hobby. Even now, I love singing because it relaxes me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct answer, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea in different words.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for myself because it helps me enjoy life and feel relaxed. Singing is my hobby, and it brings me happiness.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words. Also, be specific and avoid vague statements.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, including myself. Many people listen to songs when they feel overwhelmed because music helps them relax. In fact, singing is a part of many aspects of our lives.

× Yes, I like singing because it makes my mood phrase and since I was the little kid I like to listen the music.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it improves my mood and since I was a little kid I have liked listening to music.

The phrase 'makes my mood phrase' is incorrect; it should be 'improves my mood' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'the little kid' should be 'a little kid' because it refers to any small child, not a specific one. Additionally, 'I like to listen the music' should be 'I have liked listening to music' to correctly use the present perfect tense and the correct preposition 'to' after 'listen'.

× Mainly I listen Bollywood music and Nepali music.

✓ Mainly, I listen to Bollywood music and Nepali music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object. Therefore, 'listen Bollywood music' should be corrected to 'listen to Bollywood music'.

× Although being Nepali girl I like to listen Bollywood music a lot because of its lyrics that fascinates.

✓ Although being a Nepali girl, I like to listen to Bollywood music a lot because of its lyrics that fascinate me.

The phrase 'being Nepali girl' needs an article 'a' before 'Nepali girl'. Also, 'listen Bollywood music' should be 'listen to Bollywood music'. The verb 'fascinates' should agree with the plural noun 'lyrics', so it should be 'fascinate'. Adding 'me' clarifies who is fascinated.

× Yes, when I was small, a bit small, I learned to sing and I used to usually sing the songs as my hobby.

✓ Yes, when I was small, a bit small, I learned to sing and I usually used to sing songs as my hobby.

The phrase 'used to usually sing' is awkward; the adverb 'usually' should come before 'used to' or after it. The corrected form is 'I usually used to sing'. Also, 'the songs' is unnecessary; 'songs' is sufficient.

× I love to sing a song right now too.

✓ I love to sing songs right now too.

The phrase 'a song' is singular and may imply a specific song, but here it is better to use the plural 'songs' to express the general activity. Also, 'right now too' is acceptable but could be better as 'even now'.

× I want to sing for myself, I like to enjoy the life I have got, I like to feel relaxed and I sing as it's my hobby to sing a song.

✓ I want to sing for myself. I like to enjoy the life I have, I like to feel relaxed, and I sing because it's my hobby.

The sentence is a run-on and should be split for clarity. 'The life I have got' is better as 'the life I have'. 'I sing as it's my hobby to sing a song' is redundant; 'I sing because it's my hobby' is clearer.

× Yes, of course, including me. Singing brings happiness to the people.

✓ Yes, of course, including me. Singing brings happiness to people.

The phrase 'the people' is too specific; 'people' without 'the' is more general and appropriate here.

× I also believe it singing.

✓ I also believe in singing.

The phrase 'believe it singing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'believe in singing' to express faith or confidence in the activity.

× Some people have the habit to listen a song when they are overwhelmed.

✓ Some people have the habit of listening to a song when they are overwhelmed.

The phrase 'have the habit to listen' should be 'have the habit of listening'. Also, 'listen a song' should be 'listen to a song' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× Or in every aspect of our life there is a singing happening always.

✓ In every aspect of our life, singing is always happening.

The original sentence is awkward and incorrectly structured. The corrected sentence places the adverb 'always' appropriately and uses a clearer structure.