Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I have been learning it since I was a child. My mother enrolled me in singing classes after school, and I enjoy performing in front of an audience.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，缺少连贯的结构。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明学习方式，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I haven't learned singing systematically yet, but I plan to improve by watching videos and practicing on my own.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议明确回答想为谁唱歌，并用简单句表达自己的感受。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for people who enjoy music. Singing in front of a large audience makes me feel excited rather than embarrassed.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，重复用词，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达唱歌能带来快乐的原因，并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and relieve stress.

× I like to sing ahead of the many audience.

✓ I like to sing ahead of many audiences.

这里的'audience'是可数名词，表示观众群体，复数形式应为'audiences'，表示多个观众群体。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语的过去分词形式，'learned'是美式英语形式。根据上下文，建议统一使用美式英语形式'learned'。

× I'll learn to the right way to sing.

✓ I'll learn the right way to sing.

动词'learn'后不需要介词'to'，直接接宾语。

× Oh yes, for me not, not maybe not a person.

✓ Oh yes, for me, not maybe a person.

句子中多余的'not'导致表达混乱，应删除多余的'not'使句子通顺。

× I think seeing on one people maybe feel embarrassed by the thing of seeing be ahead of thousands of audience maybe makes me excited.

✓ I think seeing one person may feel embarrassed by singing ahead of thousands of audiences, but it makes me excited.

'seeing on one people'表达不正确，应为'seeing one person'；'the thing of seeing be ahead'结构混乱，应改为'singing ahead'；'audience'应为复数'audiences'。

× I think seeing really makes a move smooth for people because I think seeing is a type of the method to just express their express their their thinking or just less their pressure.

✓ I think singing really makes a mood smooth for people because I think singing is a method to express their thoughts or to reduce their pressure.

'seeing'应为'singing'；'makes a move smooth'应为'makes a mood smooth'或更自然的表达；'express their express their their thinking'重复，应简化为'express their thoughts'；'less their pressure'应为'reduce their pressure'。