Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I think I'm not good at it. However, I want to improve my singing skills in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议用完整句子回答，说明学习唱歌的经历，并使用正确时态和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was in primary and middle school, we had music lessons where teachers taught us how to sing properly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清，语法和词汇错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议先明确回答问题，然后说明原因，使用简单清晰的句子。

Ví dụ: I don't have confidence to sing for anyone now. But I want to improve my singing skills first. When I am better, I want to sing for my parents.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体理由。

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express themselves and their emotions.

× To be honest, I don't like singing because I feel I'm not good at singing so in my daily life I really think but I want to improve my singing skills in the future.

✓ To be honest, I don't like singing because I feel I'm not good at it, so in my daily life, I really don't sing, but I want to improve my singing skills in the future.

句子中缺少谓语动词，导致表达不完整。需要补充完整的谓语动词，使句子符合现在时态的表达。

× Yes, definitely. When I'm in primary school and middle school, we have music lessons and teachers. Can teachers taught us how to sing rightly. So I.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was in primary school and middle school, we had music lessons and teachers who taught us how to sing correctly.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应使用过去时。原句中使用了现在时和错误的过去式，需改为过去时态。

× Can teachers taught us how to sing rightly.

✓ Teachers taught us how to sing correctly.

副词“rightly”用法不当，正确的副词应为“correctly”，表示正确地。

× To be honest, nobody I want to sing for I don't have many confidence in saying so.

✓ To be honest, there is nobody I want to sing for because I don't have much confidence in singing.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的表达方式，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I don't have many confidence in saying so.

✓ I don't have much confidence in singing.

“confidence”是不可数名词，应使用“much”而非“many”。

× I want to improve my thing skills.

✓ I want to improve my singing skills.

单词“thing”错误，应为“singing”，且保持现在时态表达愿望。

× 1st and when I have when I'm good at seeing I can I want thing for my parents.

✓ First, when I am good at singing, I want to sing for my parents.

句子结构混乱，动词时态和单词拼写错误，需调整为正确的现在时态和单词。

× Of course, seeing can be a good habit for people because they can. Express their self and even express their mood through the.

✓ Of course, singing can be a good habit for people because they can express themselves and even express their mood through it.

“seeing”拼写错误，应为“singing”；“express their self”应为“express themselves”，反身代词使用错误；句子不完整，需补充完整。