Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构重复且不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy after a long day.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的语法结构。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I believe singing is for everyone to enjoy, not just for professionals.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确，句子不连贯，难以理解。建议明确回答问题，使用完整且连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I want to sing for someone I love, so I have learned some songs to impress her.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现无意义的词语，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because the melody and lyrics can make people feel relaxed and joyful.

× Yes, I think so 'cause when I was singing it make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I was singing it made me feel relaxed.

这里动词时态错误，主句是过去时态，谓语动词应使用过去式'made'，而不是原形'make'。建议动词时态保持一致。

× It makes me relaxed and also.

✓ It makes me relaxed as well.

句子末尾表达不完整，使用'and also'不合适，改为'as well'更自然。

× I never, I have never learned how to sing because I think we sing not for the professional people, but also for the normal people, the happy in the 1st place, not the.

✓ I have never learned how to sing because I think we sing not only for professional people, but also for normal people, for happiness in the first place.

句子结构混乱，时态应为现在完成时，且表达应更清晰，'not only... but also...'结构更合适。

× Honestly, I want to see something that go through and go some that love.

✓ Honestly, I want to experience something meaningful and share it with someone I love.

原句结构混乱，表达不清晰，建议重组句子使意思明确。

× I also learned some song for her.

✓ I also learned some songs for her.

复数形式错误，'song'应为复数'songs'，因为通常学习多首歌曲。

× Were Harold assumes the melody under the vocal of the song.

✓ When I hear the melody and the vocals of the song,

原句语法错误且不通顺，建议改为完整且通顺的句子。

× I really bring some happiness and make people relax.

✓ I really bring some happiness and make people feel relaxed.

动词后缺少宾语，'make people relax'应为'make people feel relaxed'更符合表达习惯。