Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since my childhood because it helps me feel connected to my emotions and soothes my ears. Moreover, singing brings me joy and relaxation after a long day.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learnt singing at my church by joining the choir practice regularly. When I was younger, I didn't know much about singing, but over time, I improved through consistent practice and guidance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to explain who you sing for and why.

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my Lord as a form of praise, and also for my friends and family. When we come together as a group, we sing and rejoice, which strengthens our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding more specific reasons and using linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel connected to others. For example, when I sing or listen to music, I feel joyful and relaxed.

× I love singing ever since ever since from childhood.

✓ I have loved singing ever since childhood.

The phrase 'ever since ever since from childhood' is repetitive and incorrect. The correct expression is 'have loved singing ever since childhood' to indicate a continuous action from the past to present. Also, 'have loved' is used to express a state continuing from the past to now.

× I love to.

✓ I love it too.

The phrase 'I love to' is incomplete and unclear. The correct phrase is 'I love it too' to express agreement or addition to the previous statement.

× I have learned singing at my church.

✓ I have learned singing in my church.

The preposition 'at' is less appropriate here; 'in my church' is more suitable to indicate the place where the learning happened.

× Whenever there is choir practice, I usually join there and learn some singing.

✓ Whenever there is choir practice, I usually join and learn some singing.

The word 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'join'. The verb 'join' does not require 'there' when the place is already implied.

× I also remember when I was quite young, I did not know about singing much when.

✓ I also remember that when I was quite young, I did not know much about singing.

The sentence structure is incorrect and incomplete. The corrected sentence properly connects the clauses and places 'much' correctly.

× Fighting, singing for me to praise my Lord also to my friends and family.

✓ Singing for me is to praise my Lord and also for my friends and family.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper structure and meaning.

× Together we membership and when we come together we get together, we sing and rejoice.

✓ Together we are members, and when we come together, we sing and rejoice.

The phrase 'we membership' is incorrect; it should be 'we are members'. Also, the sentence is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.