Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I love seeing so much because it's very useful for my tanguy and for relax. Every day I spend 20 minutes for singing for improve my skills.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think it, because every day we heard music and we learned how to sing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for me, maybe Eminem in the most popular rapper in the world. I think because they songs are very good and very useful for my improve.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
I think so because singing is very good, helps to people relax and improve their mood. So it's very good way for relax.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз сўзлар бор. Масалан, "seeing" ўрнига "singing" сўзини ишлатинг ва "tanguy" сўзи нотўғри. Шунингдек, жумла узунлиги ва тузилиши яхшиланиши керак. Қисқа ва аниқ жавоб беринг, масалан, "I love singing because it helps me relax and improve my skills. I practice singing for 20 minutes every day."
Ví dụ: I love singing because it helps me relax and improve my skills. I practice singing for 20 minutes every day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз ифодалар бор. Масалан, "I don't think it" нотўғри, уни "I haven't learnt formally" деб ифодалаш керак. Шунингдек, сабабни аниқроқ ва тўғри ифодалаш муҳим. Масалан, "No, I haven't learnt singing formally because I usually learn by listening to music every day."
Ví dụ: No, I haven't learnt singing formally because I usually learn by listening to music every day.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз ифодалар кўп. Масалан, "I want to sing for me" ўрнига "I want to sing like Eminem" деб айтиш керак. Шунингдек, сабабни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалаш муҳим. Масалан, "I want to sing like Eminem because he is a very popular rapper and his songs inspire me to improve."
Ví dụ: I want to sing like Eminem because he is a very popular rapper and his songs inspire me to improve.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Жавобингизда грамматик хатолар ва такрорланишлар бор. Масалан, "helps to people relax" ўрнига "helps people relax" деб айтиш керак. Шунингдек, жумла тузилиши ва сўз танловини яхшилаш керак. Масалан, "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and improves their mood."
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and improves their mood.
× I love seeing so much because it's very useful for my tanguy and for relax.
✓ I love singing so much because it's very useful for my tongue and for relaxation.
The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' to indicate the activity enjoyed. 'Seeing' is incorrect here. Also, 'relax' should be a noun 'relaxation' to fit the sentence structure.
× Every day I spend 20 minutes for singing for improve my skills.
✓ Every day I spend 20 minutes singing to improve my skills.
The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before 'singing' and 'improve'. The correct structure is to use the gerund 'singing' without 'for' and 'to' before the verb 'improve' to express purpose.
× No, I don't think it, because every day we heard music and we learned how to sing.
✓ No, I don't think so, because every day we hear music and we learn how to sing.
The phrase 'I don't think it' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't think so'. Also, the past tense 'heard' and 'learned' do not fit the context of habitual action, so present tense 'hear' and 'learn' are appropriate.
× Who do you want to sing for?
✓ Who do you want to sing to?
The correct preposition with 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'to', not 'for'.
× I want to sing for me, maybe Eminem in the most popular rapper in the world.
✓ I want to sing for myself, maybe Eminem is the most popular rapper in the world.
The pronoun 'me' should be reflexive 'myself' when the subject and object are the same. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' to connect the subject and complement.
× I think because they songs are very good and very useful for my improve.
✓ I think their songs are very good and very useful for my improvement.
The possessive pronoun 'they' is incorrect; it should be 'their' to show possession. 'Improve' should be the noun 'improvement' to fit the sentence.
× I think so because singing is very good, helps to people relax and improve their mood.
✓ I think so because singing is very good; it helps people relax and improve their mood.
The verb 'helps' should be followed directly by the object without 'to'. Also, the sentence needs a subject 'it' for the second clause.
× So it's very good way for relax.
✓ So it's a very good way to relax.
The article 'a' is needed before 'very good way'. The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'to' should be used before the verb 'relax'.