Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I am alone. I usually sing by myself in the hall where no one else is around. Moreover, I sing even more when I go to karaoke with friends.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn về lý do không học hát. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trôi chảy.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I find it quite complicated and difficult to pursue. Besides, I prefer to sing spontaneously just for myself.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về đối tượng bạn hát cho.

Ví dụ: It depends, but usually I sing for myself. However, I prefer to sing for my parents and siblings, and I also sing at my friends' birthday parties.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax their minds after a busy day at work. Also, for many, singing is a favorite hobby that brings joy.

× I usually singing alone when in the hall, not everybody around and just singing myself.

✓ I usually sing alone when in the hall, with nobody around and just singing by myself.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. After 'usually', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'sing' is correct. Also, 'nobody' is more appropriate than 'not everybody' in this context, and 'singing by myself' is clearer.

× And if especially if I go to karaoke, I will singing the more.

✓ And especially if I go to karaoke, I will sing more.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'sing' instead of 'singing'. Also, 'the more' is incorrect; 'more' is sufficient.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are acceptable past participles, but 'learned' is more common in American English. This is a stylistic choice rather than a strict error.

× Well, I have not because I because I see it very complicated and also difficult for me to pursue this type.

✓ Well, I have not because I see it as very complicated and also difficult for me to pursue this type.

The phrase 'because I because I' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'see it very complicated' should be 'see it as very complicated' to be grammatically correct.

× And uh, also I just want to sing spontaneously for myself.

✓ Also, I just want to sing spontaneously for myself.

Starting a sentence with 'And uh, also' is redundant and informal. Removing 'And uh,' improves clarity and formality.

× I think it depends uh because I usually sing for myself so I would rather I would prefer to sing it to my parents, my siblings and if it is a friend's party birthday I will sing for them.

✓ I think it depends because I usually sing for myself, so I would prefer to sing to my parents, my siblings, and if it is a friend's birthday party, I will sing for them.

The phrase 'I would rather I would prefer' is redundant; 'I would prefer' is sufficient. Also, 'sing it to' should be 'sing to'. The phrase 'friend's party birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'friend's birthday party'.

× Of course, seeing can bring happiness to people because it can help them relax their mind after a busy time. Work.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it can help them relax their minds after a busy time at work.

'Seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. 'Relax their mind' should be 'relax their minds' to agree in number. 'Work' should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity.

× And also and also is is is their hobbies to sing, Yeah.

✓ Also, singing is their hobby, yeah.

The sentence contains repeated words and unclear structure. Simplifying to 'Also, singing is their hobby' makes it clear and grammatically correct.